Fic: Developer; Tim char piece, PG

Apr 09, 2007 19:36

Title: Developer
Author: Kezzy
Rating: PG, I suppose? Definitely not adult, how's that?
Timeline: Post Jason Todd's Death
Disclaimer: Not mine. Make no money from them.
Summary: Tim is pretty sure he's seen the right things in the pictures he's taken
Word Count: 465

I know who you are )

rating: pg, char piece, genre: gen, dcu, char: tim, fic

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neneboomerwing April 10 2007, 03:00:31 UTC
(real quick, there's the word "fair" down at the bottom that should be "far")

he’s read things, he’s studied and laid the biology of want to bare with his logic

I am so in love with that line. It's so. . .Tim. So very, very Tim. And I adore. I adore your Tim voice like I adore your Jason voice and Dick and if you ever wrote Bruce I'd probably die.

I love this mostly because Tim really would catch the things between Robin and Batman vs. Bruce and Jason. Because he is smart and sneaky and awesome.

Gah.

Awesome.

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geeksicle_kezzy April 10 2007, 04:20:04 UTC
heee, thank you! (shhh, I'm writing Bruce now. The dialogue is a WHORE)

That Tim catches it and then just GOES with it totally kicks my ass. Totally.

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geeksicle_kezzy April 10 2007, 04:15:01 UTC
<3333

You're totally the best to write at. MUST finish your Dick/Bruce tonight and tomorrow morning. I'm totally withholding chunks of it from you as prizes for sitting through the whole damn thing.

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snake_easing April 10 2007, 03:18:48 UTC
Wow... It's awfully creepy to have Tim auditioning for the role of Robin when he knows the job description includes "fuck-buddy". I love how you're writing Tim here. The last paragraph is great.

By the by, how are you doing with that all-evil!AU?

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geeksicle_kezzy April 10 2007, 04:14:02 UTC
Oh yes, I love the creepy value of Tim and his deduction skills and how right it is.

My notes list for it is so long, dear lord. *cuddles it* So well! Probably start writing it concretely next month, I hope.

Thank you for the feedback! Of course of course.

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1_900_mimicry April 10 2007, 03:46:43 UTC
Hi, Kez!

Oh? That stuff all over the ground? That's my brain, and I think it belongs to you now because your fic was the cause of it separating from the rest of my head in the first place.

I *loved* this. With that type of scary, obsessive loves that *scares* me. Your wee!Tim is a delight, and his little thoughts and his camera with the damn pictures!

He wants to be *appealing*, of course he wants to be appealing. Oh, Timmy, you are a delightful freak and don't ever change.

I *really* loved this.

He closes the file and pushes the image from his mind, it won’t do, thinking about it while he’s-no, it won’t do to think of it.

Eek. Oh -- eek.

I always think to myself, when Tim stutters something *infinitely* important and/or deadly is going through his mind.

This has yet to fail me.

I swear this entire fic is like getting *slapped*. Sharp, painful, with a little bit of that *good* burn around the edges.

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geeksicle_kezzy April 10 2007, 04:12:13 UTC
God, I love your feedback to insane levels and you KNOWS IT.

I swear this entire fic is like getting *slapped*. Sharp, painful, with a little bit of that *good* burn around the edges.

This made me grin like a FOOL. Love it.

And yes, Tim stutters during the Big Thoughts in my head too, it just makes SENSE that his vernacular would fail him when he gets all mentally excited or intent.

*massive loves* Thanks for the awesome comment, you wins.

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katarik April 10 2007, 04:18:15 UTC
Tim is the *biggest freak in freaktown*. And since Freaktown is Gotham, that's saying something.

Also so gay for Dick, and so scary-focused, and such a *stalker*.

Gyaaaah, and also eek, and also OH WEE BABY TIM.

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geeksicle_kezzy April 10 2007, 04:21:49 UTC
Ahahaha. "Biggest freak in freaktown" I'm going to have to shove that onto a damn icon somewhere, because yes. Yes he IS and it's totally saying something considering his competition. I love his Freak Factor so hard.

So gay for Dick. Dick broke him at an early age and never let go.

And thank you! Wee Baby Creepy Tim needs SUPER love.

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