And oh, good, I really love where you stick-beat me to end it, you were totally right, ending with Batman's mindfuck is completely perfect and tossing in Jason's actions there were just. right.
I needed to email you back, randomly, and laugh my ass off about some of your comments in the ending that just completely killed me. Like Bruce Wayne needing to pay off way too many people. I couldn't stop cackling every time I got to that part of the fic, thinking about Jason wandering about displaying his clothed erection proudly and Bruce Wayne following behind him, handing everyone a check and an apology. <3
Yay, I'm a dream! Please tell this to everyone I live with. I may print this comment out and frame it as evidence. I'd love to do this again and am quite certain I'm hitting you up again soon. Please feel free to send me any fics of yours if you need a beta.
I was seven when he died and actually remember it being discussed somewhere. Years before I was into comics, even. Strange times.
See, I'm not THAT in love with Jason-as-Robin, though I think he's great. Maybe it's the intense amount of PAIN he brings as Red Hood that totally captures me. I'm a pain girl.
But YAY, I'm so glad you liked this. God, they are ALL about their past, it's what makes it greeeeat. <33 Thank you!
Heeee. Your feedback makes me grin FOOLISHLY. So I'm just going to sit here grinning somewhat maniacally and completely contentedly for a few moments.
*sits*
*several moments later*
Hee. You for the complete comment WIN, I love it, thank you. *gushes back*
I like how Jason totally susses him up and gets what he's doing, because through weakness he can really gain what Bruce is like
Yes. Dear GOD, one of the biggest reasons I'm totally in love with Jason versus Bruce is just the whole big MIND FUCK of it and the way they KNOW each other and Jason KNOWS Batman. He knows BRUCE and Bruce WAYNE and uses it viciously and perfectly. Best weapon EVER against the Greatest Detective.
Plus Jay's been taking Tim lessons and all that stalking has to pay off.
*giggles* Oh, totally. Jay stalking Tim is such a pretty mental image. For really.
I love that line.
Hee. Good, that was one of the quiet lines that snuck into my brain that I really fell in love with, so I'm immensely pleased you liked it.
Kyaahhh! XD So much amazing in one small area. <3 Really love the way you write for Jay, ( poor guy wants Bruce pretty bad ;.; ) Bruce getting onto Jason for language = always fancy. Good job. ( + thank you, we need more Bruce/Jay >.< )
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Having the knife suddenly not be soundless anymore was the right thing to put in there at the end.
You were a dream to beta for--let's do it again sometime, eh?
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And oh, good, I really love where you stick-beat me to end it, you were totally right, ending with Batman's mindfuck is completely perfect and tossing in Jason's actions there were just. right.
I needed to email you back, randomly, and laugh my ass off about some of your comments in the ending that just completely killed me. Like Bruce Wayne needing to pay off way too many people. I couldn't stop cackling every time I got to that part of the fic, thinking about Jason wandering about displaying his clothed erection proudly and Bruce Wayne following behind him, handing everyone a check and an apology. <3
Yay, I'm a dream! Please tell this to everyone I live with. I may print this comment out and frame it as evidence. I'd love to do this again and am quite certain I'm hitting you up again soon. Please feel free to send me any fics of yours if you need a beta.
Your icon is still scaring me.
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Please feel free to send me any fics of yours if you need a beta.
Sure!
Your icon is still scaring me.
Don't be silly, it's just invisible paint! A paint that... causes invisibility...
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Man, I was born the year Jason *died*, and when I came into fandom what I fell in love with was Jason-as-Robin, but I like Red Hood *too*.
Jaaaaaaaaay. I love how you worked in their past relationship, informing and complicating their relationship now, and oh Jason is a W00BIE.
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See, I'm not THAT in love with Jason-as-Robin, though I think he's great. Maybe it's the intense amount of PAIN he brings as Red Hood that totally captures me. I'm a pain girl.
But YAY, I'm so glad you liked this. God, they are ALL about their past, it's what makes it greeeeat. <33 Thank you!
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*sits*
*several moments later*
Hee. You for the complete comment WIN, I love it, thank you. *gushes back*
I like how Jason totally susses him up and gets what he's doing, because through weakness he can really gain what Bruce is like
Yes. Dear GOD, one of the biggest reasons I'm totally in love with Jason versus Bruce is just the whole big MIND FUCK of it and the way they KNOW each other and Jason KNOWS Batman. He knows BRUCE and Bruce WAYNE and uses it viciously and perfectly. Best weapon EVER against the Greatest Detective.
Plus Jay's been taking Tim lessons and all that stalking has to pay off.
*giggles* Oh, totally. Jay stalking Tim is such a pretty mental image. For really.
I love that line.
Hee. Good, that was one of the quiet lines that snuck into my brain that I really fell in love with, so I'm immensely pleased you liked it.
And the fact that he so ( ... )
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Super-icon love too.
Thank you so much for commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed this!
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