Abandoned quotes

[geeky_apple]

Leftover quotes from the fic-meme:

2. “She wanted to touch him, but would not wake him for the world...”

6. "He’s getting better. Four months since the shooting and the shadows are starting to fall away when he smiles."

7. "His hair naked from the shower, lying flat in a haphazard pattern, clueless as to how to behave without direction. The

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Ideas, yes...

[fauxcynic]

Worth: nada

2. I'm not allowed to say. :P
6. Dunno, and dunno if I have even read the story (terrible memmory!) but I want to, because the sentence is absolutely beautiful.
7. Read, the story, I think...

See? I'm no help.

Re: Ideas, yes...

[geeky_apple]

Hm…the review says you've read Nr. 6, but it was decidedly mean and evil of me to take a line that’s rather unrelated to the plot… So: By someone whose writing is at the same time funny and profound and it has a similar plotline with repetitive / multiple AU’s like a movie where a whole town celebrates rodent.

And it has this:
"She hadn’t noticed it before, hadn’t seen the utter vulnerability on his face. It took a lot for him to ask. For him to put aside his own issues and open himself up for rejection. She realizes with a start that this must be the first time he’s ever asked anyone since the shooting. "

(Gah, fic-rambling brain taking over:-/ Did I already mention that I’m mean and evil and need to be ignored? (Could I make up for luring you into playing with trying that prompt I owe you?))

Re: Ideas, yes...

[fauxcynic]

...it has a similar plotline with repetitive / multiple AU’s like a movie where a whole town celebrates rodent.

Oh!!! Finally caught the hint!! (and boy did I not recognize even that review line! :P)

Got it; was ITL's "repeat til she gets it right" story but I have to go find the name...

aha! "Take Two."

...right?

Re: Ideas, yes...

[geeky_apple]

Right:-) (Once more proving my remarkable ability to create confusion)

[mrsevilpigeon]

7 is driving me crazy, because I know I know it. It's Mia's Christmas story...the one in front of the fire?

[geeky_apple]

Mia is right, not the Christmas story however… (Do I make you feel like a blindfolded strike the pot-child?)

[mrsevilpigeon]

#2 isn't Winter's Chill, is it? I'm pretty sure Max didn't let Logan get much sleep in that one, but I'm out of ideas otherwise.

ITL's...I should have gotten it based on the tense. Doh.

And how many stories has Mia written with Logan coming out of the shower? Because we ought to give her an award when she reaches 100 or something...

shriveled raisin brain striking

[geeky_apple]

Ooohh, I’m so sorry:-( You were right of course, it is Mia’s Christmas story as in ‘Because’ but with Mia and Christmas story I was automatically thinking of Deliverance.
Sorry! (Sometimes I really think I shouldn’t be allowed to communicate)

Just extend the punishment and make the eggs cover me with crayon until it looks as chaotic as my state of mind while you tickle me with the onions.

Re: shriveled raisin brain striking

[mrsevilpigeon]

"Just extend the punishment and make the eggs cover me with crayon until it looks as chaotic as my state of mind while you tickle me with the onions." -- I swear to God it's a miracle that I understood every word you said there.

Still think we should challenge Mia to write 100 fics of Logan coming out of the shower...

Re: shriveled raisin brain striking

[miamo81]

Can I point out that 7 was Lisa's Xmas story from me?

I am very proud of her for recognizing it and amused by the discussion that followed. =)~