Poetry - Week 13

[geenerswh]

Ok, I know my poetry's been slacking...but here's one for ya.
Actually, it's lyrics for a song I'm working on. The prompt (title) was for a poem, but as it began appearing in my head, it formed into a song.
Thoughts?
"Two Right Turns Away"http://www.writing.com/main

Comments

[tenshiyuugiri]

Well.. having no musical knowledge, really.. I cant say a whole lot, other than I hoe I can hear you sing it sometime!

[geenerswh]

Sure thing....just remind me.

Don't have the guitar figured out yet, but I have the tune.

[tenshiyuugiri]

Hopefully I'll remember to remind you. XD

You're even going to do a guitar part? :o Sweetness! XD

sing it!

[cairocandy]

I'd like to hear this to music-I really love the last stanza and would like to hear part of it repeated-or almost repeated-in another place...nice work...sandy-waiting for the record...

Re: sing it!

[geenerswh]

Thank you! If i ever get it fully organized, I'll try to record it and post it somewhere.
Hm...I'll have to play with the repetition some more, see if I can get it to work.