"second start to the right, straight on till morning"

Feb 06, 2008 10:56

sharp fangs pierce my vein ( Read more... )

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turantula February 6 2008, 23:07:05 UTC
I like this! It speaks to me. Did you write it, or did you take it from somewhere?

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geffenhawk February 7 2008, 03:28:15 UTC
thanks! i wrote it. if it's from someone else i always give them credit.

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traveling_poet February 8 2008, 02:34:34 UTC
hey Mac one little question for you...

"sucking at my should"
is this supposed to say sucking at my shoulder? becuase if you mean should I don't think I understand what you mean by it. But other than that it's great! And I agree with the disgust in morning bit! hahaha.

*hugs*
Jeff

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geffenhawk February 8 2008, 03:30:30 UTC
heh...it was a typo. should have been "soul" fixing that now!

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traveling_poet February 8 2008, 20:34:36 UTC
ahh ok now it makes sense! hahaha

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