Oasis Project. Chapter 2

[geleeober]

                                                                        Oasis Project

Title:  Oasis Project. 
Author: Geleeober, originally written by Ohya Kazumi
Genre: Comedy, Romance, 
Pairing: Yoosu and Jaeho
Genre: Some parts are PG-13 and some parts are for Mature. This chapter is PG-13.
Summarry: After moving with his uncle, Yoochun faces one

Comments

[redmist_23]

You're getting better with the grammar stuff. quite close to the original story. keep it up.

[geleeober]

thanks. i'm not so sure whether i should make it different or similar. I still want to keep the same theme and meaning but inculding my own thoughts. thanks for reading and commenting.

[redmist_23]

Ya, I know the feeling, whether to stick to the original or to be different.(had the same problem when I was doing my fic)

I think whatever feels right to you.

[fuu_luv_tofu]

haha first?

finally I know what is that big thing is haha Junsu is a clean person isn't he? like Jaejoong neh?

yeah...you're right...its going a bit too fast but I pretty much think it is fine!!!! really though I think Yoochun should run up and sooth Junsu instead of watching how beautiful Junsu and his tears are...don't tell me he's falling in love already? aww...watching Junsu cry make him cry~ so sweet and cute of Yoochun!!!

rofl Yoochun shall forever be JaeHo shipper eh? awesome!!!! JaeHo should be here any time now!!! XP

don't worry about grammar I am bad at grammer myself >< but as long as I can understand you I really don't care about the grammar mistakes!!!! ;)

awaits for your next update!!!! and I want to ask is Minnie going to be here?

your writing is fine~
continue on working hard and I will bet many people will read it for sure!!!!

^_~

[fuu_luv_tofu]

oops...

I guess I'm second? XP

[geleeober]

thanks so much. you gave me encouragement. although it's like past 12am, i think i'm going to start on the next chapter.