[ficlet] FF7: PostMortem Obligatory Notes

Jan 26, 2011 20:56

You & Me
FF7
Sephiroth/Cloud
Notes: Possible UST? In PostMortem AU, Sephiroth and Cloud finally interact, with horrible, grisly results. Contains arrogance, vocab words, and dry tone.
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Sephiroth can honestly say he never laughed before going medically insane )

sephiroth, cloud, ficlet, postmortem, ff7

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beruthiels_cats January 27 2011, 18:13:41 UTC
Oh, BRAVO! Whose clones, indeed...

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gelfling8604 January 31 2011, 03:44:47 UTC
Thanks! I kinda wanted a mix of Seph/Cloud clones, but basically a genetic/chemical soup that didn't really resemble either of them, much. Like something out of a bad sci-fi movie.

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sugarcubechibi January 28 2011, 05:30:58 UTC
So very powerful-- to the point you can feel Sephiroth's burning spite and hate and the sheer hysteria in this overwhelming cycle...

Just leaving me at a loss for words with really, really sparkily eyes. Utterly /gorgeous/. *applause*

The characterization was GOLDEN! *dies*

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gelfling8604 January 31 2011, 03:42:33 UTC
Hee! Glad to hear it! About the spite and hate thing; I'm always worried when Sephiroth starts having all these lines/actions, because he's such an easy character to get WRONG. Which I don't like doing.

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skiestrife January 31 2011, 03:28:28 UTC
"but he knows that mouth, those lips, so ridiculous looking on a man" That line kind of make me think that the clones are Clouds clones right? Anyway, excellent work as always, please update soon.

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gelfling8604 January 31 2011, 03:38:20 UTC
You got it! I wanted it a bit ambiguous, but yeah, the clones were meant to be a mix of Cloud/Sephiroth, not really well mixed, but a start. And I've got a couple other ficlets for this AU in the beginning stages too; hopefully will update real soon.

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Cloud/Seph clones skiestrife January 31 2011, 19:25:25 UTC
Thank you for the info. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

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jie_jie January 31 2011, 22:25:00 UTC
Wow, that was some seriously intense writing.

I think arrogance was the perfect word to summarise this fic and you certainly captured Sephiroth's. Great work! ^_^

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gelfling8604 February 1 2011, 03:53:58 UTC
Yay! I always worry when writing Sephiroth; it's so easy to get him wrong, to make him too casual. He's a really rigid character for me.

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