Comments | geminigrl11: It's estei's day! I haven't missed it!

geminigrl11

It's estei's day! I haven't missed it!

Jun 17, 2008 19:33

Right down to the wire, but here it is, dear ( Read more... )

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havenward June 18 2008, 18:30:47 UTC

Found this from Estei thanking you. Its a fun read, I think you captured the brothers' personalities and relationships very well. Kudos :D

geminigrl11 June 21 2008, 20:04:21 UTC

(mmm, your icon. *grabby hands*)

So glad you liked this, and that it seemed to fit the boys! Thank you!

legoline June 19 2008, 06:52:32 UTC

Oh my God...that was so, so lovely. I also really like the way you describe things and how you set the mood of the piece (yes, aren't I eloquent today? :-) ). Well done!

geminigrl11 June 21 2008, 20:04:55 UTC

You are perfectly eloquent to me. :D

So very glad you liked! Thank you!!

brigid_tanner June 19 2008, 12:19:41 UTC

Awesome. Dead on brotherly banter. Nice to see Sam not fighting with John.

geminigrl11 June 21 2008, 20:05:56 UTC

I so agree...they must have gotten along every now and then, right? Just for variety, if nothing else!

So glad the brotherly banter came through...dialogue is always the hardest part for me by far.

abandonedworld June 19 2008, 16:34:48 UTC

<333 Loved this! =)

geminigrl11 June 21 2008, 20:06:32 UTC

YAY! \o/

erinrua June 19 2008, 18:28:54 UTC

This is clever and fun and brotherly, and I loved seeing a more balanced Sam. He couldn't have been a miserably pouty brat all the time, lol! Plus the ending was a fun little surprise. :-)
Cheers ~

Erin

geminigrl11 June 21 2008, 20:07:12 UTC

I 1000% agree.

So glad you liked this (and that twist at the end was the most fun to write). ;)