Fic: The man who had none of the luck 5/6

[gemnoire]

Title: The man who had none of the luck part 5
author: Black Gem
pairing: Arthur/Eames
characters: Arthur, Eames
rating: R
warnings: mentions of violence, rape and other dark themes
disclaimer: I own nothing, I'm just playing with them.
Summary: When Arthur choose to go to ground, even the hounds of hell couldn't drag him out

Comments

[clair3]

omg..........this is making cry.....literally..........I hope Arthur will come out stronger....

hoping for the next part to be out soon!

[gemnoire]

Is it right I should be happy I caused tears? Thank you for your kind comments.

The next bit may take a couple of days longer, but that's mostly because this part wrote pretty much wrote itself (seriously, it was scary).

[biohazard_03]

I was rereading the earlier chapters throughout the afternoon, so you can imagine how happy I was when I hit the refresh button and saw the new chapter has been posted!

What a heart wrenching reunion! I hope Eames would be able to help Arthur recover from this horrific experience, I do want to see them happy together... *fingers crossed* And I hope we would get to see Eames unleashes his wrath on Carnhain...

Urgh! I can't believe there is only 1 chapter left! I hope you won't leave us waiting for a week before the final part is up... Just wondering, would the issue as to why Eames' sister brought this information to Eames in the first place be resolved? Or would there be another fic set in this universe after this?

P.S. Eames wondered briefly if the other man had taken his quip about the shirt too literally. - I burst out laughing when I read this.

[gemnoire]

I can't really comment about the resolution... you'll have to wait and see, but there will be both the next part and a short epilogue. It's possible I may be leaving the door open to some sort of sequel.

The next bit should be up in a couple of days - I'm travelling tomorrow, so that should give me plenty time to write.

Thanks for the lovely comments though - feedback really does keep the creative juices flowing.

And I liked the comment about the shirt too - felt like a very Eames thing to have in there.

[ihni]

Of course he's coming!

I'm so very glad that they found him, finally, and that he managed to get away and hide like that. It makes sense that Eames found him. I just hope that he can man up and take care of Arthur now, although I'm guessing Cobb was close to the truth when he said that Arthur can fix himself. He probably can, but it'll be easier with Eames, I'm sure.

Anyway! Very good chapter, as usual, and I'm looking forward to the next one.

[gemnoire]

Thanks for the lovely comments as always, hope the final chapter can live up the rest of them.

I had to allow Eames his moments of self-doubt, he insisted. Of course convincing Eames to take care of Arthur is one thing, convincing Arthur he might need taking care of is another.

[jenna_marianne]

Yay, new chapter! They finally found Arthur, phew. Liked the reunion scene w/ Arthur & Eames (and the tattoos). Looking forward to their reunion with a lucid Arthur.

One question: What about the the Irishman & Charlie!?! Arthur didn't get them, did he? Yikes!

[gemnoire]

Thank you, I have to say the reunion scene came first in this part, then I built the rest of the chapter around it (it was one of those ideas that just jumped up there and stuck).

As to the Irishman and Charlie - you'll just have to wait and see... there are a few loose ends to be tied up in the next section.

[haolover9312]

This was beautiful... I teared up when Arthur was checking Eames's tattoos to make sure that this wasn't a dream and Eames feeling guilty at the end made me cry... Great job.