Fic: Missing Him - Part Six - The Confrontation

[genclay]

Title: Missing Him - Part Six - Confrontation
Fandom: JLU
Pairings/Characters: Bruce/Clark, others
Rating: PG (this part)
Summary (This Part): Elle embarks on a little trespassing. Bruce realises he's a father.
Word count: ~2230 (~11430 total so far)
Disclaimer: Not mine, etc.
Notes: This fic is about 20k long. It's written but I'm still poking the last

Comments

[northern_star]

hee! :) I'm so glad you posted!!

(and I'm glad I got a break so I could read it, too. hehe!) I liked this part - Batman just kills me. *lol* Security isn't that good....poor Bruce! And then he gets that this is really Superman and he's all flabbergasted. Thank goodness for masks, huh? lol!

Looking forward to the next part (the next one is the end, isn't it?)

[genclay]

:D

Hmmmmmmmmm...... the next part is the last part you've seen..... and i'm nearly uptodate with other stuff... expect new stuff flying your when in the next week :D

Ps, I really couldn't do this with ya.

[northern_star]

*totally* looking forward to seeing the new stuff. :D

[dm_wyatt]

Awesome update!

I love how much like Clark Elle is and how flumoxed Bruce is...

[genclay]

Thanks.

Elle being like clark was crucial to me. It's the one thing I wanted to do. :)

[cassandra581]

That was the best! I absolutely love this story! Poor Bruce, first Clark disses his security and then he finds out he knocked up and has a child with his best friend. What's a man to do? Can't wait for the next part.

[genclay]

I can't see Clark in any guise missing the opitunity to one up Bruce :P

then he finds out he knocked up and has a child with his best friend. What's a man to do?

I love that description :D

[brushed_velvet]

0_0

Ooooh the confrontation! Loved Batman all shocked and Elle doing the Superman stance right in front of him. :D

And J'onn, oh I love him and his carefully expressed advice to Batman! *huggles J'onn*

[genclay]

I had fun writing this.

I wanted to include J'onn. Onw of my favroute things is how others react to the Supe/Bat dinamic.

Theres a great Wally - Bruce interation in the next part :)

[kittymayhem]

*screams* Oh my god!! That was so WORTH the wait!!

Man, you totally personified Superman through her actions. Taking the lead when she was supposed to be examined! *hugs her to death* Genius!!

And poor Bruce...now he knows, and he CAN'T run away from it.

I'm SO looking forward to the next part.

[genclay]

sos about the wait, bad weekend in RL.

And yes, Bruce can't run away from this... And gets more traped in the next part.

I'm thinking Thurs, so go for Friday :P