Missing Him - Part Seven - Pale Blue Eyes

[genclay]

Title: Missing Him - Part Seven - Confrontation
Fandom: JLU
Pairings/Characters: Bruce/Clark, others
Rating: PG (this part)
Summary (This Part): Elle returns to her former self. Wally babysits. Bruce and Clark start to have 'that' conversation
Word count: ~2500 (~14000 total so far)
Disclaimer: Not mine, etc.
Notes: This fic is about 20k long (possible

Comments

[lunatic_lullaby]

Flash babysitting a Superbat baby could be its very own series. :D

I like how Clark's being all cool about this, as Elle and as Supes. Her walking into the Watchtower just like she's the guy in charge was just awesome. Now it looks like Clark's completely passing over gender issues and getting down to business. His Anti-B.S. superpowers at work...

[genclay]

I have alot of love for Wally and he really would make the best baby sitter in my opinion :p

I must finish this! it's in a gobbdy goop stat on my laptop atm :/ I'm fainally moving this weekend so fingers crossed I'll get it done soon. :)

[loke_21]

I just love this story. You can't imagine how many times I have read it over and over again. It gets better and better after every read. I can't wait to read more soon.

I love how Clark is cool and understanding. I like how you portrayed him as not a shy and ackward idiot in front of everyone. I always thought Clark was the master of disguise, fooling everyone into not see Kal, only the clumsy reporter.

And the "experience" that Elle showed when he was with Bruce confirmed that "THANK GOODNESS!" he's not a virgin! lol I mean...we have to give Clark some credit right? :)

I love it and I can't wait to read more.

[loke_21]

Holy! It's been a year and a half! I may have forgotten the title of the story, but I still remember the plot and how incredible a read it was. So thanks again for opening it up and I am totally looking forward to the next installment. :) Awesome work!

Bump

[lilacs_roses]

Someone was just asking about this story and, since I was verifying the link I had for it, I thought I'd see if any more of the story had been posted.

Given the time that's passed, I'm thinking this has been put in the 'abandoned' folder? I hope not, but I know how the muses can be.

[ctbn60]

hi! Do you still post on LJ? did you possibly finish this? It is wonderful!