(Fic) Amazing (1/1)

[general_public]

Title: Amazing
Author: general_public
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Summary: James Kirk; domesticated and in love. So this is what it's like.
Word Count: 1,384
Disclaimer: Not mine

Comments

[anniesong]

They are amazing. As are you :) I love reading them being all domestic.

[general_public]

Thank you! :)

[thelilytriad]

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I could perfectly envision this. It was so sweet and easy... and I think they really could be that way if they quit being silly boys.

[general_public]

Thank you! I'm happy the story worked for you. :)

[ruefull]

Awwwwwww!!!!! Oh, that was so lovely and gentle and lyrical...just a delight! I adored it, how cleanly sweet, and so well balanced! Wonderful!

[general_public]

Thanks so much! :)

[thalialunacy]

This is... this is... perfect. Well, okay, except for 'disguarded' instead of 'discarded', and a couple other things but who cares when given the utter beauty of this prose. :scrabbles for words: When I write, I really am writing for tone, for atmosphere, for a scene. Because there are, what, six plots in the world? so clearly what happens isn't nearly as important as how it happens. And how it happens here is beautiful: a lot of show-don't-tell, a lot of mixed emotions, a lot of bits of their surroundings put in as the characters would or wouldn't notice them. GAH. I LOVE IT, BB. FAVORITING YESTERDAY. <3<3<3

[general_public]

Thank you! I don't have a beta reader and apologise for any typos that slip through - but I'm really happy any niggles didn't spoil your overall enjoyment of the story. So glad you liked it. :)

[prongsy]

That hit just the right note. I had this fear it'd be overly sappy and pink hearts twirling around unicorns... but nope. That was sweet and perfect but oh so them!!

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[general_public]

Thanks! Writing in-character fluff is tricky but I'm really pleased to hear I got it right for you. :)