Crossed Signals, Part 2/4, Star Wars AU, Han Solo/Luke Skywalker, Rated PG-13

[general_solo]

TITLE: Crossed Signals, Part 2/4
AUTHOR: general_solo
FANDOM: Star Wars AU
CHARACTERS: Han Solo, Luke Skywalker, Leia Organa, Wedge Antilles, Chewbacca
Pairings: Eventually Han/Luke
RATING: Rated PG-13 for language; may be a higher rating for other parts.
WARNINGS: None for this part besides a little bad language
WORD COUNT: 2040
DISCLAIMERS: I don’t

Comments

[caryn_b]

I love the way you've portrayed all Han's jealousy and dark thoughts. He's so confused by his feelings for everyone, especially as it's something so new to him. I like the description of the party, and Wedge was just great, especially the tattoo part! As for Luke, he's not likely to be very happy, seeing as Han isn't keeping to his promise about not disappearing. The ending to this part is perfect, and I can't wait to read the final part!

[general_solo]

Yes, except for his friend, Chewbacca, Han doesn't really have anybody. Now he has the opportunity to be a PART of something. And he cares for Leia and he REALLY cares for Luke and that is the most confusing thing of all. Luke is supposed to be his friend but Han wants more than that and he's extremely attracted to Luke physically and he feels guilty about that and hasn't even considered that Luke may want the same thing...Han's still got the Luke/Leia happy couple thing going in his head.

You like Wedge and his tattoo! I thought I'd spice him up a little. That tattoo's a whole other story by itself.

[caryn_b]

Oh, I love Wedge and his tattoo! Maybe because I have a bit of a thing for tattoos anyway. And a whole other story - sounds like something you should write to me :D

And yeah, Han's guilt - I can really see him having these feelings, and the whole threesome business is very confusing for him, and very real! It was very real in the films, so it's good to have a perspective on it.

[sandspirit]

I love this story. The banter with Wedge and with Leia, Han admiring Leia and thinking about Luke.
> He sniffed at the remaining flower. Was he supposed to eat this?
Great line. :)
And great job on describing Han's feelings!

[karmic_fic]

man this is really tugging on my heartstrings!!!