oneshot : butterflies

Dec 26, 2010 21:49

title: Butterflies
author: Sharmel
pairing: Billie/Mike
rating: R
summary: "I pictured that he would take me to an isolated location, far away from the blinding city lights, the intimidating skyscrapers, and away from any judgemental stares that seared holes in my tight, black, filthy jeans."

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pairing: billie/mike, slash, one-shot, rating: r

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synnerxx December 27 2010, 04:11:17 UTC
So sad and heartbreaking, but I love it bb. <3

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generationxhero December 28 2010, 23:37:29 UTC
I'm so glad you do, bby. Thanks for sticking with me. <3

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synnerxx December 29 2010, 00:04:19 UTC
:D Of course. I've already made myself at home here, lol. I'm not going anywhere. :D

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anonymous December 27 2010, 22:54:45 UTC
Hauntingly beautiful. You have the power to seduce the world with your writing.

-Tara

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generationxhero December 28 2010, 23:37:46 UTC
Shit, I am all smiles. Thank you, dear. <3

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the_wondering_1 December 28 2010, 03:52:27 UTC
And all the while, I lied there silently in my warm cocoon as if waiting for spring to come by once again so I could emerge from my hallow nest. But my spring would never come, and I was left here all alone, unattended, with a new body pressed against me.

Wow. Have I ever told you that I really wish I could write like that? You're so amazing with that. You really are.

But even though we both remained nameless, he knew me all too well. Sometimes, I was afraid he knew me better than I knew myself.

And that. I really loved that. I feel like you conveyed so much in so little, if that makes any sense.

I really just loved it; you did amazing with it and I wish I could write like that.

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generationxhero December 28 2010, 23:38:38 UTC
Oh man, thanks so much girl. I love it when people use quotes from the story and not just saying how much they like it.

Thanks so much, I'm seriously smiling like a fool right now. <3

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saintxcharlatan December 28 2010, 05:14:29 UTC
I love you.
A lot.
<3

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generationxhero December 28 2010, 23:39:05 UTC
Aww, I love you, too, Aly.
<33

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saintxcharlatan December 29 2010, 03:36:22 UTC
Icon twinnnnnns :)

Can we AIM chat soon? I miss you.

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tophie_chan December 29 2010, 06:33:36 UTC
" My spring was already long gone and I missed my chance to dance about with the rest of the butterflies."

AWWW...NICE......it inspired me!
thnks girl!! :hugs:

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