oneshot : reasons (CM)

[generationxhero]

Title: Reasons
Rating: R / FRM
Pairing: Hotch/Reid
Word Count: 3,509
Summary: But as Aaron lay in bed with his lover who was still sleeping soundly beside him, and his son who was in the next room over, he couldn’t help but wonder what he did to deserve Spencer.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters used in my story. They belong to CBS

Comments

[generationxhero]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear that. <3

[hartley_s]

Oh my word-- Spencer said Fuck. D8 So OOC, I will not forgive that at all. He would say something like "I don't care". He doesn't swear, even when he's in extreme pain, why would he break that and swear to Aaron at all? Hotch mentions that it's unlike Reid to swear, but seriously... I don't think Reid ever swears. And if he did it wouldn't be "fuck", it would be "crap" or some other, really awkward 3rd-grade cuss. Same with the "goddamn" x) He's also kinda OOC at the beginning when he's talking, but it's not that bad and it makes the story work. Anyway, one other criticism is that you switch from viewpoint to viewpoint, which is neat in a way but tripped me out. It's so... smooth, there should be some sort of thing to distinguish the different narratives before you say "Reid thought" instead of "Aaron thought

[schnuffie]

[generationxhero]

Haha, thanks for reading! And love your icon by the way, the textures are wonderful. <3

[maldeluxx]

You're not senile, Rossi is" *LOL* I love how Spencer can be so patient and loving to make Hotch feel better :)

[generationxhero]

Ahaha, yes! I had a little snicker when I wrote that line. Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

[maclabv]

Absolutely perfect. I loved it from the very start of it.

[generationxhero]

Aw man, I'm so flattered and glad. Thank you so much!