the why's [short series]

Mar 12, 2011 01:06

Title: The Why's [1/7]
Rating: R / FRM
Pairing: Hotch/Reid ; established relationship
Word Count: 1,521
Summary: Yet, for the first time in years, David Rossi had a hard time finding the answer - an answer that was right there in front of him, glaring at him. The silent pleads, the coincidental eye contacts, the brisk body contact, all the evidence was ( Read more... )

slash, criminal minds, pairing: hotch/reid, rating: r

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ordinaryxday March 12 2011, 07:11:07 UTC
I love reading your Rossi characterization just as much as you love writing it.

This really was a wonderful little start to this little series and I can't wait to see where it goes from here ;)

But yes, I thought that you managed to grasp Rossi's character quite well, especially for your first shot at it. I also liked the overall feel of this piece, the ego yet the uncertainty made it seem that much more real, y'know?

I think I'm rambling now. I liked this. Can't wait to read the next part.
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generationxhero March 14 2011, 06:01:30 UTC
Aw man, I'm all smiles now. I'm so happy to hear that. And oh yes, me too. ;D

Seriously, I"m so glad you liked this. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't have gotten into CM nor would I have continued with fanfics. Thanks for all your support. <2345678

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maldeluxx March 12 2011, 11:50:30 UTC
This is very interesting - can hardly wait to read more! :D

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generationxhero March 14 2011, 06:03:01 UTC
Thanks! I'll be posting another update very soon. <3

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anonymous March 13 2011, 02:06:17 UTC
Oooh, this is both sweet and vaguely mysterious! And Rossi is hysterical. Hooray for more!!

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68luvcarter March 13 2011, 03:09:12 UTC
I like this, I like the way you captured Rossi's arrogance without being unbearable. Look forward to the rest.

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generationxhero March 14 2011, 06:04:24 UTC
Thank you! I was worried that his arrogance might come off as too much, but I'm glad I accomplished it without being unbearable. I'll be posting more very soon. <3

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generationxhero April 3 2011, 04:31:51 UTC
Thank you so much!

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