the why's [short series]

[generationxhero]

Title: The Why's [5/7]
Rating: R / FRM
Pairing: Hotch/Reid ; established relationship
Word Count: 1,647
Summary: With tears streaking down her flushed cheeks, Penelope Garcia moved silently back to the waiting room and allowed herself be enveloped by Morgan’s strong arms as tears fell down harder.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters

Comments

[ordinaryxday]

You're breaking my little heart, y'know? But you know that.

The way you wrote this was gorgeous. How you showed everyone as trying so hard to be strong but ultimately breaking down over Reid's condition was captured wonderfully.

I know I've told you this over and over again but they way you're capturing the characters is lovely. I really, really love reading this.

Can't wait for the next part. ;) <23456

[generationxhero]

Thank you so much. <3

Seriously, I'm so glad you like this. And if it weren't for you, I wouldn't have written this.

<234567

[ivorysilk]

Still really liking this!

(as a side note, when you're done or at some point, you might want to get a proof reader, because I've noticed slight wording things--for example, the tumour spreading at an impeccable rate, when I don't think the word impeccable means what that doctor thinks it means *g*--sorry, couldn't resist the PB reference!)

Anyway, very much looking forward to the next part!

[generationxhero]

I'm glad to hear it! And thank you for pointing that out. Any recommendations for proof readers?

Thanks for your lovely comments. I really appreciate it.

[freddlerabbit]

I'm always happy to proof something for you if you like - just PM me! But if you keep writing tearjerkers like this one, then you owe me Kleenex. :)

[generationxhero]

Would you really? That would be fantastic! In fact, I'll send you part 6 right away. Thanks so much! And oh boy, wait until you read the last two parts. You'll need a wad of Kleenex, just saying. xD

[68luvcarter]

Ahh, tears first thing in the morning. You're breaking my heart.

[generationxhero]

Haha, oh no. I'm sorry. Would you like some Kleenex? xD

Thanks for sticking with me. <3

[maldeluxx]

*tissues* Poor Spencer (and Hotch) :(

[generationxhero]

Yes, heartbreaking. ):
<3

[generationxhero]

Thank you very much! I'm fairly new to this fandom as well. I'd just recently started to write CM fics, and it's very fun to write - and a challenge, too. Thanks for reading! <3