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oneshot : the naked truth

Oct 10, 2011 11:37

Title: The Naked Truth
Rating: PG-13 / FRT (dark, angst)
Pairing: Hotch/Reid ; established relationship
Word Count: 3,281
Summary: His own husband couldn’t even come to him, didn’t even bother confiding and seek comfort from him, Spencer had to go out and seek other people for all those things.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters used in my ( Read more... )

slash, criminal minds, rating: pg-13, pairing: hotch/reid, one-shot

Comments 17

just_jasper October 10 2011, 21:11:37 UTC

Man that was angsty and gorgeous. Well done.

generationxhero October 10 2011, 22:05:29 UTC

Thank you!

kuriadalmatia October 10 2011, 22:16:23 UTC

I loved how you incorporated Spencer going to JJ's to grieve and the effect on Jack when Spencer wasn't home. The lines about Pakistan and him needing a break from it all were perfect. I'm glad that someone else tackled this difficult issue.

Thanks so much for sharing

One minor edit: "His never remained locked onto Aaron" maybe should be "His gaze remained locked onto Aaron"?

generationxhero October 10 2011, 22:45:03 UTC

Thank you. In "Proof" when Reid told Hotch that he had been going to JJ's for 10 weeks straight, hence why he was mad at her and not him, made me think about (in a Hotch/Reid universe) of how that would effect not only Hotch but Jack as well. And that (in my headcannon) since Spencer and Jack are close, Jack would always want to follow Spencer wherever he went.

Haha, yes, it's a really good issue to write about. It could go any direction, really.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Edit:
And thanks for pointing out that error. Fixed! :)

ordinaryxday October 11 2011, 03:00:54 UTC

Fuck. I had a nice, long comment written out and then I hit something on this keyboard and it went back a page and I lost it all.

Anyways. I'm so glad you wrote something, I've seriously missed your writing.

And this piece was fantastic. The angst was well delivered and heartbreaking, but I like my angst to break my heart a little bit. I loved the character interactions, especially adding in Jack and how the strained relationship affected him (because you know how much I love Jack).

Basically, this story is exactly how I would imagine things would have gone if the relationship truly was cannon. (lol what am I saying, it is so cannon)

But I think that (it matching how I would imagine it to be in the show) comes from us having twin brains.

This was wonderful and my previous comment was better.

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generationxhero October 16 2011, 21:33:17 UTC

Omg, stupid computer. D: But thank you! Gah, it feels so nice to write something again. I blame school for being so hectic and demanding. xD

dsjfaskfha thanks for the amazing comment and compliments. You're the best.
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aqua_zephyrus October 11 2011, 04:12:51 UTC

I wish I had more words than "utterly beautiful to a point of tears."

Missed your writing. <333 So beautiful.

generationxhero October 16 2011, 02:51:31 UTC

Aw man, thank you so much. I'm all smiles right now. And it feels so nice to have people say that to me, it's such a great feeling to know people out there enjoy what I write. <3

lycanqueen October 11 2011, 04:38:25 UTC

That was really good. Normally I don't write or read anything other than gen but I could imagine this situation completely. Well done.

generationxhero October 16 2011, 02:50:17 UTC

When people read my story, it makes me feel happy and accomplished. But when someone who doesn't normally read what the type of genre (etc.) I write and enjoys it, now that really makes me feel accomplished and overjoyed. Thank you.