title: reasurrance author: sharmel pairing: billie/tre or billie/mike or even billie/jason (whoever you want, really) rating: pg disclaimer: i wish do not own Green Day. word count: 209
You just made my heart fall apart and I love you oh so much for it.
I loved how you had Billie look at his finger and it's not even that the ring wasn't there anymore (that's obviously important) but, as you put it, the "white line indicating his eighteen year marriage. Eighteen years." That was perfect. And I loved the water (drip, drip) and how Billie thinks about 18 years going down the drain. That was perfect as well.
I miss you! I hope things are going well for you and I hope that you'll write more in the future. I miss seeing you around here :)
Thank you! I haven't written anything in a long while, and I decided to put my built up creative juices to work, haha.
And I missed you, too! All of you. I'll try to write more! Most likely they'll be shorter fics since October is midterms month, haha. Oh university life. ):
Wonderfull piece of writing...i love the way you capture the feeling of time passing with the ticking clock and the dripping tap and then Billie becomes anxious suddenly. Beautifully captured - i think we have all been there in times of extreem hardship. There are too many things to love about this fic...mostly i love the sense of the unknown and filling in the blanks yourself. It's great that you are back writing!! I used to lurk on comingclean and love your stories when you were an active writer...look forward to nrw stories from you ; )
Yes! I wanted to use some type of metaphor for time, and what other than something domestic like water? And thank you so much! I'm working on another fic, hopefully it'll be done soon! :)
Good choice! I was actually thinking of Tre when I wrote those. But then after I wrote this story, I realized that it was better if I left the characters nameless.
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I loved how you had Billie look at his finger and it's not even that the ring wasn't there anymore (that's obviously important) but, as you put it, the "white line indicating his eighteen year marriage. Eighteen years." That was perfect. And I loved the water (drip, drip) and how Billie thinks about 18 years going down the drain. That was perfect as well.
I miss you! I hope things are going well for you and I hope that you'll write more in the future. I miss seeing you around here :)
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And I missed you, too! All of you. I'll try to write more! Most likely they'll be shorter fics since October is midterms month, haha. Oh university life. ):
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Thanks for reading and commenting! <3
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