Comments | genfic: Lying In Wait (HP, Sybill Trelawney, PG-13)

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Lying In Wait (HP, Sybill Trelawney, PG-13)

Sep 19, 2004 00:33

Title: Lying In Wait
Author: Simone Alexa (five_x_five)
Fandom: Harry Potter
Character(s): Sybill Trelawney, mentions of Albus Dumbledore.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sybill Trelawney is shaped by a lifetime of loss.
Notes: I don't speak Italian, so mistakes may be rampant. Apologies in advance. Unbeta'd.

( She wakes with the words 'ave' and 'morte' in her mouth. )

Comments 4

velvetandlace September 18 2004, 21:48:10 UTC

As a rule, I stay out of the HP fandom, but this is lovely. Very well-written and structured. Delicate but with hidden strength in your writing style, and a powerfully sympathetic view of an underrated character.

five_x_five September 18 2004, 21:59:50 UTC

Thank you so much - I'm glad the style worked, because it was an experiment in a different way of writing.

Your icon rocks, too.

velvetandlace September 18 2004, 22:03:59 UTC

I think you can safely say your experiment paid off!

Thanks for the icon-love - unfortunately, I can't take credit for it, but I found it at subreality.com

dariclone February 28 2009, 23:21:57 UTC

Simply beuatiful writing. This gave me a completly different perspectove on Sybill.