{One-shot} Sunset - Nabari no Ou

[genius_freak]

Title: Sunset
Fandom: Nabari no Ou
Genre: Angst/Fluff (Flangst?)
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Miharu/Yoite
Warnings: Um...slight spoilers? Nothing that big though...I haven't read the manga past chapter 17, so this doesn't include any of the events that occur later on in the manga.
A/N: This is my first major escapade into the Nabari no Ou fandom, and

Comments

[lonelyblkviolet]

Awww. Bittersweet. That's an interested view of Miharu you made there. Very nice, and keep writing!

[genius_freak]

Thanks! *sheepish grin*

I thought I made him kind of OOC, but I'm glad to see that it turned out okay. ^_^

[lonelyblkviolet]

Maybe you should keep on practicing with his character. Although yes, he was a bit OOC, I can feel your pain because Miharu is a difficult character. ^^

[genius_freak]

*headdesk* I figured.

Yeah XD I probably should. Thanks for your help! ^_^

[linne_linne]

Aww, I like this drabble. =) It's so bittersweet, as;dlkfjl. For a first fanfiction, it was really great~ are you sure that you've never written a fic before? =P

As for Miharu being overly OOC, don't worry about it; his character was fine-- although, he'd probably end up granting Yoite's wish in the end and make us into sad and heartbroken fangirls DX, despite the fact that he'd rather be with him forever and ever. Silly Miharu, doesn't he know that it's okay to be selfish once in a while? Especially for him, who's always so indifferent... *snifflies*

Thanks for sharing~ :D

[genius_freak]

Thanks!

Ha, I'm pretty sure. *blushes* The only ever attempt I made at fanfiction before lasted about 2 sentences before I scrapped it.

Ah, that's good. I feel somewhat better about it now. ^_^
Yeah, Miharu probably would and all of us fangirls would cry and drag the few fanboys down with us

Thanks for reviewing!~ (and totally making my day)♥

[nekoxmarionette]

-Pokes.- Hey you, your writing is pretty good.

-Stares.- Are you ...?

Gomen... Your style reminds me of someone.

[genius_freak]

Thanks!

Um...now you've got me curious. Who do I remind you of?

[nekoxmarionette]

Ha ha ha ha some buddy named Prongs-san.

Good at web design and writing. -Shrugs.-

Oh well n.n Nice to meet you.

[genius_freak]

Oh... XD

That's definitely not me. I've never been called Prongs before in my life. I'm more of a Moony person, actually...
And I suck at web design ;p

Yoroshiku~ : )

[iruka92]

That's very sweet. :)