Distracting addictions

[genki_blonde]

I want to thank my youngest brother for helping with this. ;D Thank you!

After a two week long mission Klaus felt more tired than ever. Maybe it was age catching up or the fact that after he and Dorian had gotten together five years ago, he couldn’t help worrying about his lover whenever either one was away on business. Already he could feel the

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[niastyle]

Dorian addicted to video games....LOL. That is so awesome. My last boyfriend could sit and play for hours. I slowly grew to hate video games. I like your story, it's really cute.

[genki_blonde]

Thank you for commenting. :) It makes me happy to know you liked it!

Acutally, I don't like video games either. ;3 I'm already too busy asi it is. x)

[die_heitere]

Hey, that was posted on my birthday! :D

Looks having a lover mellowed Klaus out a bit. I waited for him to simply pull the plug, grab Dorian and heading of with him to real ... adventures. I still somehow presume this might happen sooner or later, we just don't get it to read. ;) Cannot be that Dorian lets himself go that much!

Little citique: I think the "five years" are a bit too repeated/overemphasized at the beginning, but that's it.

[genki_blonde]

Happy birthday! ;)

Klaus is most likely going to pull the plug soon. ^^ First he just wants to torment Z a little. :D

IMHO Klaus finds Dorian playing something where he has to shoot and which has a lot of violence to be amusing. It's good blackmail material for the future.

Gah! I try not to have too much repetition, but sometimes it sneaks its way in.

Thank you for commenting. :D I'll answer to the others later!
Good day!