Comments | genlisae: Pleasantries - Chapter 6 - In the Line of Duty

genlisae

Pleasantries - Chapter 6 - In the Line of Duty - Part 3

Dec 05, 2014 13:06

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chapter 6, pleasantries

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genlisae December 7 2014, 07:52:14 UTC

Lilith and Caelan are getting along TOO well! >:| They were not supposed to and they are messing with my plot lines ( ... )

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genlisae December 8 2014, 20:21:30 UTC

I am horrible and haven't caught up on your story yet. (It is on the to do list, just as soon as I can get off this damn phone! Why for contractors and delivery people can not get co-ordinated on things ( ... )

ritaxis December 6 2014, 02:28:43 UTC

Okay, this is really on track, I think. I don;t think the initial scenes are poorly written. I'm worried for Lilith once Winston leaves. Of course he won't leave permanently! But it's a mess. It's all a mess, which is why you're writing it. Welcome back, again.

genlisae December 7 2014, 07:54:01 UTC

Thank you. It is good to be back. :D

anonymous December 7 2014, 12:19:30 UTC

I found Your story week ago and I fell in love with it! So You wouldn't believe how happy I was, when I saw new part of chapter! I love your style of writing, I simply adore that picture of Ripp and Tel <3 They are so perfect together! I just wonder what will happen when his father will find out. Please add Chapter 7 soon :)
And sorry for my mistakes. English isn't my national language but I'm really trying to write good.

genlisae December 7 2014, 21:35:47 UTC

Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying the story. (Also, your English is better than a lot of people who speak it natively. Good for you, learning languages is hard!)

klokwatcher December 8 2014, 02:23:53 UTC

Loved all three parts! You're killing me with this story! In a good way, of course. ;)

I've got to know what's going to happen between Anto and Rick. And I really thought Caelan was eventually going to end up hitting on Tybalt. I was surprised he asked Lil out instead! Yay for unexpected twists! I love it!

So John Mole and Edward Contrary are mixed into the alien killing. The plot thickens! Can't wait for more! It's SO good! :D

genlisae December 8 2014, 16:40:49 UTC

:D Glad you are enjoying it.

I have got to know what is going on between Anto and rick! I seriously don't know anymore!!! lol I can't say much about anything else you mentioned, bu I can say Caelan is not finished with the surprises yet. =

tay_dw March 15 2015, 01:37:02 UTC

I knew this wasn't complete, but I read it anyways. Now I'm left wondering what will happen next and when it will ever be updated.

genlisae June 30 2018, 19:40:47 UTC

Late reply is late. I am actually finishing the whole story as we speak and will post it all when it is done. :)