Perhaps, but the men's proof certainly features fewer grammatical and typographical errors.
In the second typed line, the proof says "First we sate that men need tie...." This has two typos.
The sixth typed line says, "And we all know know men want girls as many as possible." This is poor syntax. It should be phrased "...want as many girls as possible."
The seventh typed line says, "Because they want to have sex as many as they can." This contains two errors. First, it is a dependent clause and cannot stand as its own sentence. Second, the word "many" should be replaced with "much" or, even better, "often."
The eighth typed line features a rather unconventional use of a tilde, although I suppose this is allowable.
The last typed line capitalizes "Men" but not "girls" for seemingly no reason. "Men" is not a proper noun.
The last written line says "men is worse than evil" -- the "is" should be an "are," of course.
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thats very mathed out..
and im worse than evil!!
mauhaha
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isnt it cool though.. ive seen that thing about girls and i was like damn its not fair!! and now look!! haha im glad
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