Squee~ I loved this part... Especially Fyo's "Uncle Alfie," which was completely adorable. Poor guys, though... Countries ravaged, America's children gone... That's gotta be hard.
Also, if you need help with proofreading, my grammar and spelling happen to be one of the few things I pride myself on [being a grammar nazi and all lol] so if you need help, i'd be glad to~
:D Fyo is my absolute FAVORITE character out of all the bits I've written so far. Him and Russia. And maybe Iceland.
D: It is very hard...I'm doing a Russia bit next, then 'The Death of California', which is supposed to encompass the deaths of the Western Rocky States as a whole...its all very sad, really.
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...:D AWESOME, GRAMMAR NAZI! I needed one of those, my grammar is just horrible!! Thank you so much!!
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I offer my services as a proofreading beta, but seeing as how I'm still reading the book, you'll have to find someone else to fill that role, haha.
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Yeah, the death and angst can get a bit much, I know. Hopefully I'll be able to get a good balance.
That's ok, thanks anyway!! When you finish the book, maybe we could work something out then.
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Also, if you need help with proofreading, my grammar and spelling happen to be one of the few things I pride myself on [being a grammar nazi and all lol] so if you need help, i'd be glad to~
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D: It is very hard...I'm doing a Russia bit next, then 'The Death of California', which is supposed to encompass the deaths of the Western Rocky States as a whole...its all very sad, really.
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...:D AWESOME, GRAMMAR NAZI! I needed one of those, my grammar is just horrible!! Thank you so much!!
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The Death of California will make me very sad... I love California, I've lived there my entire life. <3
no problem. :D i'd be glad to help.
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D: I want to live and work in California someday, so writing it makes me a bit sad too...but it must be done.
:D Thanks so much! When I get the next bit finished up, I'll note it to you, ok?
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