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Mar 11, 2009 18:09

Title: Right here waiting
Author: Geojitmal
Rating: G - PG-13 maybe
Word count: 1,760
Pairings: G-Top
Genre: A bit of humor....and fluff
Summary: "What's up with you? Sitting in the dark living room, watching god-knows-what on TV, weeping..."
"I wasn't weeping!" Jiyong interrupted, defensive.
Diclaimer: All mine. At least TOP <3
A/N: First ( Read more... )

big bang, oneshot, gd/top

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vangelynn March 12 2009, 14:40:01 UTC
There are so many little bits that I want to quote >.< The beginning was cuuuute then towards the end it was just die-hard romantic ^_^
There was this certain paragraph that I enjoyed the most:
Taeyang would probably worry if he had eaten enough, offering to cook something "real quick". Daesung would probably ask a million and a half questions about how his day at the studio went. Seungri would complain to him about Daesung beating the poor maknae on PS3 repeatedly, and TOP would...well, TOP would probably just sit on the couch and watch them, Jiyong thought, remembering the day before.

I love it when people expose the members' personalities in one paragraph XD

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geojitmal March 12 2009, 18:12:58 UTC
Haha, I know what you mean, I like that too ^^ I was surprised I could write something like that myself, lol. |D;

Thank you for commenting ^_^

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joanc20 March 12 2009, 16:41:25 UTC
ahhhh, this is soooo romantic.
and gd crying over that is sooo cute.

oh, i'd love to hear top sing. *goes off to daydream*

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geojitmal March 12 2009, 18:14:04 UTC
TOP singing is so epic, I love it everytime he does it. ♥ He should really do it more often ^-^

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parkchoongjae March 12 2009, 17:04:09 UTC
so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
i love cheesy stuff as well. haha.
i love it when gd goes all girly like that, it makes TOP doubly HOT. XD

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geojitmal March 12 2009, 18:14:35 UTC
Haha, it does! XD
Thanks for commenting ^-^

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fullofwishes March 14 2009, 05:11:16 UTC
OMG, this is sooooooo sweet. I'm such a sucker for this kinda stuff~
It was funny and well-written too, which is always a bonus!
GTOP FTW~ &hearts

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geojitmal March 15 2009, 09:41:45 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it ^^

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vaneszikkipower August 4 2009, 17:52:47 UTC
Amazing loved this story.
Romantic TOP :)

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