NCIS. Abby/Kate. 053. Earth. *

Feb 21, 2006 02:28


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lab_brat February 21 2006, 09:40:53 UTC
that was brilliant. I loved Abby, you write her well. And the banter between them all was great. And I literally laughed outloud when Jack showed up. The phone camera bit. lol

noticed a spelling mistake here tho:
Colonel Carter did not arrive her in a ball of

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geonn_ncis February 21 2006, 17:53:22 UTC
that was brilliant. I loved Abby, you write her well. And the banter between them all was great. And I literally laughed outloud when Jack showed up. The phone camera bit. lol

Thank you! And yeah, I could just picture Jack being like a little kid in the helicopter ;-D

Colonel Carter did not arrive her in a ball of

Doooooooh. Thank you! I do that typo a LOT.

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chiroho February 21 2006, 15:15:01 UTC
Very cool. You're right that it's a much better cross over than your first attempt - though that really wasn't all that bad.

I really would like NCIS to come out on top. I mean, you know Gibbs doesn't want to just take this lying down. It seems such a cop out to just have the President pull SG1 out of the fire. You'd really think that they'd have to do that themselves once in a while. Or at least have to suffer for a while. You know what I mean?

Well written though, and the banter was good. I really do think Tony, despite what he says, has more of a thing for brunettes than blondes, but that's just me. ;-)

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geonn_ncis February 21 2006, 17:47:09 UTC
Very cool. You're right that it's a much better cross over than your first attempt - though that really wasn't all that bad.

Thank you much!

I really would like NCIS to come out on top. I mean, you know Gibbs doesn't want to just take this lying down. It seems such a cop out to just have the President pull SG1 out of the fire. You'd really think that they'd have to do that themselves once in a while. Or at least have to suffer for a while. You know what I mean?

Oh, I definitely know what you mean! It's just... well, the President as deus ex machina seemed like the easiest way to end the story without Gibbs having to hear about aliens, Ancients and the Prometheus. ;-D

Well written though, and the banter was good. I really do think Tony, despite what he says, has more of a thing for brunettes than blondes, but that's just me. ;-)

Heee, I think he has a color-blind thing for hot women, though ;-D He tells blondes he loves blondes and brunettes... et cetera ;-D

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chiroho February 21 2006, 18:10:13 UTC
without Gibbs having to hear about aliens, Ancients and the Prometheus

True. I don't know though. Gibbs can be the proverbial bulldog when he wants to be.

think he has a color-blind thing for hot women

Probably. I can still see Kate giving him a really nasty look when he comes on to Sam though. You know, that "you're so sleeping on the couch tonight buster" look. ;)

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geonn_ncis February 21 2006, 18:15:38 UTC
Probably. I can still see Kate giving him a really nasty look when he comes on to Sam though. You know, that "you're so sleeping on the couch tonight buster" look. ;)

*laughs* Maybe she did and I just didn't chronicle it! You know that whole writer-as-an-objective-observer thing... ;-D

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crashcart9 February 22 2006, 07:29:36 UTC
But I'd like to exhaust all terrestrial explanations before I start booking Klingons. *SciFi fangirl squeal* (Star Trek was my first real fandom.)

"New rule. When the President tells you to play dead, you best get on your back and put all four in the air." LOL!

*Bemoans the minute, if not nonexistant bit of Abby/Kate. This one so shouldn't count. (Says me, who just wants more.)*

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geonn_ncis February 22 2006, 07:33:01 UTC
*SciFi fangirl squeal* (Star Trek was my first real fandom.)

LOL, I think a lot of people in fandom now are here because of Star Trek. But not me. I was indoctrinated with SG-1! :D

*Bemoans the minute, if not nonexistant bit of Abby/Kate. This one so shouldn't count. (Says me, who just wants more.)*

Awww! The rules state the claimed characters must at least be MENTIONED. So, since they both make appearances, it counts. I may have to do something extra for you to make one of the remaining fics count double... that Kate/Abby/Alexandria thing you mentioned, maybe... ;-D

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crashcart9 February 22 2006, 07:37:48 UTC
The rules state the claimed characters must at least be MENTIONED.

And I thought I had you. :P

Wait, what's that sound? Oh yeah, that's them changing it to Fanfic200.

No? Damn.

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geonn_ncis February 22 2006, 08:07:15 UTC
And I thought I had you. :P

*glee*

Wait, what's that sound? Oh yeah, that's them changing it to Fanfic200.

AAAAACK! *iz ded*

No? Damn.

You wouldn't want me dead anyway! R-right...? ;-D

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