The premise is interesting, but I'd like to have found out more about exactly why Kate does have the gun. Is it only when Abby's over, or is there another reason?
The premise is interesting, but I'd like to have found out more about exactly why Kate does have the gun. Is it only when Abby's over, or is there another reason?
That was the one thing I thought was wrong with the story; it didn't really address that. But, meh, I wanted to post and I didn't want to distract from the smut with depth ;-D I may have to do a sequel, though... or a Revised Edition. Oooo ;-D
i too was wondering wether Kate had her gun just when Abby's over, in your story. Other than that, its very good, as always. glad to head there might be a sequel or a revised edition :)
as for the gun issue, i thought for a moment that kate would say she slept with the gun because she felt the need to protect abby.
Um. Wow. That's, like, the perfect resolution. If I rewrite this, like I keep saying I will, I'm definitely gonna use this and give you credit for fixing the story!! *bows to you*
Um. Wow. That's, like, the perfect resolution. If I rewrite this, like I keep saying I will, I'm definitely gonna use this and give you credit for fixing the story!! *bows to you*
thanks! that would be awesome to read more on that story. i liked kate being so eager to prove herself. and for pete's sake i'm dying to read the next chapter of "broken" ^_^
thanks! that would be awesome to read more on that story. i liked kate being so eager to prove herself. and for pete's sake i'm dying to read the next chapter of "broken" ^_^
LOL, thanks! As for Broken... I'm not sure when/if I'll manage to finish that. I really shot myself in the foot trying to make it canon with McGee and everything... :-/ We'll see! I still have... *thinks* Six stories left to write! ;-D
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*squiggles* Yay, smut!
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That was the one thing I thought was wrong with the story; it didn't really address that. But, meh, I wanted to post and I didn't want to distract from the smut with depth ;-D I may have to do a sequel, though... or a Revised Edition. Oooo ;-D
*squiggles* Yay, smut!
*agrees!* ;-D
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I concur.
(Ooh, big word for 1:53am)
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(Ooh, big word for 1:53am)
Inevitably, one frequently uses polysyllablic words once the brain begins shutting down.
Or something.
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Other than that, its very good, as always. glad to head there might be a sequel or a revised edition :)
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as for the gun issue, i thought for a moment that kate would say she slept with the gun because she felt the need to protect abby.
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Thank you!
as for the gun issue, i thought for a moment that kate would say she slept with the gun because she felt the need to protect abby.
Um. Wow. That's, like, the perfect resolution. If I rewrite this, like I keep saying I will, I'm definitely gonna use this and give you credit for fixing the story!! *bows to you*
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thanks! that would be awesome to read more on that story. i liked kate being so eager to prove herself. and for pete's sake i'm dying to read the next chapter of "broken" ^_^
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LOL, thanks! As for Broken... I'm not sure when/if I'll manage to finish that. I really shot myself in the foot trying to make it canon with McGee and everything... :-/ We'll see! I still have... *thinks* Six stories left to write! ;-D
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