THREE-WAY

[george66]

Title: THREE-WAY Chapter Three
Pairing: Ennis Del Mar - Jack Twist - and Jack's twin cousin Jake Gyllenhaal.
Disclaimer: We know the drill.
Genre: The ultimate AU!AU
Thanks: To my wonderful and glorious betas beatriceorme and lalaynia. Believe me they both gone beyond the call of duty! To trekfan for her encouragment and opinion!
Declaration: To victopet who has been wanting a three

Comments

Best three-way ever...

[anonymous]

"It felt as if the two dicks inside him were about to slam together, so deep inside his guts was Jack’s monster..."

Holy shit...I need to go change my clothes. ;)

Best three way ever! And the best part...you aint done yet. ;)

'haunted'

Re: Best three-way ever...

[george66]

Haunted,

I got to be truthful! I re-read some parts of my story and I thought to myself, "My God did I actually write that???" That line you quoeted - oh my goodness!! Jack and Jake gave it good to Ennis didn't they?! (laughing)

GEORGE

Best three way ever...

[haunted_by_bbm]

Whoops, sorry, thought I signed in.
That was me up there. ;)

'haunted'

Re: Best three way ever...

[george66]

Yes I see!! Thanks again haunted!!

GEORGE

Re: Hotness!!!

[george66]

Thanks Jamie! I have to admit I was afraid that the idea of a threesome with Jack and Ennis may turn off some brokeback readers but when I decided to use Jake as Jack's cousin and seeing how victopet been wanting one for a long time I decided why not! Thanks for commenting.

GEORGE

[victopet]

Well -- I think you win the prize George, for "Most sexually detailed story" here. OMG!! Identical cousins? Well, I can't help thinking of that Disney movie where they had "identical cousins." But gosh, they weren't having sex!! I hope they're 3rd cousins or something. First cousins sounds really weird, so I overlooked that little detail if it is true.

This line was the first sign of alarm for Ennis:

“Wha..wha..what are you two gonna do to me?” Ennis was grasping the situation. This wasn’t right, he thought. Can’t let two men do this to me.
Well, hell Ennis. Yes you can. And you're gonna love it!!

Ennis begin to have this sneaking suspicion they may have done this before, more then once.OMG!! These cousins prey upon lots of men and do this??? FAINTS....Slutty Jack AND slutty Jake? FAINTS again

[george66]

Vic,

You have no idea how happy you are making me!! I wrote this story out of pure fun but I was also hoping that you would enjoy it!! I'm so glad it seems that you are. Yes there was a point when I just let my imgaination go crazy. I mean come on - the idea that Jack and Jake are roaming the country side looking for men to have and devour, I mean GOD!! What a delicious fantasy! And I have to admit there is something very exciting about a bottom Ennis. (laughing)

GEORGE

[iamastarin2006]

shit don't need a dam shower for this one need a dam walk in freezer ....... and no parka required.....

and I'm supposed to sleep after this ... yea right...

thanks george maybe dreams can come true.....

oh boy , boy , boy

[george66]

Kaylin,

You delicious thing you! I hope the freezer wasn't too cold. Don't want you to get froze bite! We readers need for you to contiune writing your own stories! (hint, hint - laughing)

Hugs.

GEORGE

[iamastarin2006]

Thank you george I will trust me.. I'm writing and I should update you guys as soon as my beta gets back from christmas so she can check it out and I am getting a new computer my old one had to be lied to rest so I have been going to my cousins house which can be a pain .... so should have a new one by next month and then just try and keep me away from updating you'll get sick of see me so much...

as always love and hugs for you and all your family .... kaylin

[george66]

Oh Kaylin,

We can never, never, ever, ever, never, never get tied of you!!!

Hope you are having a glorious and safe holiday!!!

GEORGE