Wham, Bam, Thank ya, Ma'am!

Jan 21, 2007 03:18

Title: Wham, Bam, Thank ya, Ma'am!
Pairing: Jake Gyllenhaal/Heath Ledger
Disclaimer: This is pure fantasy, I have no idea of the boys true sexuality
Genre: One-shot RPS
Story Summary: Heath wants a quicky

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sixtieshairdo January 21 2007, 09:56:16 UTC
Jake heard wet slapping sounds as Heath jacked his cock with one of the hands he removed from holding Jake’s cheeks apart. His pants and groans were muffled inside my butt.

freudian slip my dear george!

i'm having the worst flu ever but damn this writing is making my head spin! loving the title and the smexiness! when it comes to pwp/smex you are the undisputed king! i'm serious!

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:39:11 UTC
Jake heard wet slapping sounds as Heath jacked his cock with one of the hands he removed from holding Jake’s cheeks apart. His pants and groans were muffled inside my butt.

I refuse to answer this question under the off chance that I may incriminate myself! (LAUGHING!)

Sixties I hope you feel better soon and if my story put a smile on your face, I'm glad. (smiling)

GEORGE

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under_wyo_skies January 21 2007, 10:09:40 UTC
Oh my, George! oh my oh my oh my!

I do so love your little interludes, you don't hold back, no sirreeeeeeeeeeeee!

Helen XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:34:20 UTC
Helen,

Its always sooooo good to here from you sweetie! Yes, when Heath gets the need, he has to get fulfilled ASAP. I'm just happy our boy Jake has the stamnia to take it. (laughing)

GEORGE

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fizzywhizbee January 21 2007, 10:29:53 UTC
No one writes hot smex scenes like you George!

I was amazed when I saw this line: They were more then friends with benefits.
because ironically I just finished a chapter yesterday where Jack tells Ennis that they are "best friends with benefits"!

I guess its true, great minds do think alike!

Love ya George!

Fizzy
: )

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:31:06 UTC
They were more then friends with benefits.
because ironically I just finished a chapter yesterday where Jack tells Ennis that they are "best friends with benefits"!

Fizzy, what story was that??

As always Fizzy, thank you for commenting. Now get back to your writing! I need an update to Mountain Murder Mystery ASAP!!!!! (laughing - seriously)

GEORGE

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WILL DO! HOW ABOUT TOMORROW? fizzywhizbee January 21 2007, 23:10:09 UTC
The good news The chapter I just finished, includes thefirst smex scene. YAY!!!! : D

The bad news is that it is in Chapter 4 : (

But, I promise that there is some good and funny stuff in between!

BTW--when they do finally get down to business, Ennis practically attacks Jack!! More yay! : D

Fizzy
: )

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Re: WILL DO! HOW ABOUT TOMORROW? george66 January 21 2007, 23:24:56 UTC
Oh Fizzy! I'm soooooo happy! I can't wait to read it!!

GEORGE

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nstarr January 21 2007, 12:03:23 UTC
How do you do it? You take the dirtiest, nastiest (in a good way) sex and then you mix it with complete infidelity, and you still manage to make them sound like the most amazing a caring guys on the planet!!!

He-he I loved it!! Wonderful lazy sunday morning reading!!

much love nicky xx

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green_ray January 21 2007, 12:37:50 UTC
You take the dirtiest, nastiest (in a good way) sex and then you mix it with complete infidelity, and you still manage to make them sound like the most amazing a caring guys on the planet!!!

LOL, my reaction exactly, although I couldn't put it as well. Hurray, George!

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:27:27 UTC
Ray,

Like I told Nicky, I have no idea how I does it. Like you, I love those guys and I will never be able to see them as bad people. Flawed maybe, but never bad. After all who can blame Heath for not wanting to have Jake all to himself while knowing he doesn't have the right and who can't blame all of Hollywood at not wanting to have our Jakey?? (yummy-yummy)

GEORGE

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:23:16 UTC
Nicky,

I can be perfectly honest - I have no idea! (laughing) I think it has to do with the fact in real life we all get the sense that both guys are really good-nature at heart and that feeling comes through not just in the writing of those guys in all the stories but also in the readers. As always Nicky, thank you for commenting.

GEORGE

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melissasdavid January 21 2007, 16:13:19 UTC
*loves George*

I never read RPS but you tempted me this morning....

Loved it sweetie....

*growl* and *squeeeeee*
xoxoxox
Melissa

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george66 January 21 2007, 17:18:23 UTC
Awww, thank you Melissa for your comment. But you shouldn't be reading stories - you should be busy writing the next chapter of your story for us to read! (laughing)

GEORGE

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