ENNIS DEL MAR'S MASSAGE PARLOR

Feb 24, 2008 09:53

Title: Ennis Del Mar's Massage Parlor
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Genre: One-shot LoveFest AU/AU
Rating: NC-17 - for lots and lots of sex!
Disclaimer: We know the drill.
A/N: Not surprisingly I'm late with my entry for the LoveFest Festival that our darlings sienata and lolitaray so brilliantly created for all of us to enjoy and have fun with. Thank you darlings for this ( Read more... )

ennis/jack, lovefest, one-shot

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lizbird February 25 2008, 04:45:33 UTC
uh-huh! good smex like only you can do it. whew!

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george66 February 27 2008, 16:46:53 UTC
Hello Liz,

Thank you for reading and enjoying the story! I'm glad you liked it.

george

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madbottoms February 25 2008, 09:06:44 UTC
Holy Fuck! That was awesome. That descriptive dialogue was damn hot!

You rock!

Hugs

Sandy

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george66 February 27 2008, 16:45:22 UTC
Thanks Sandy. I worked hard with the dialogue in this story. I wanted it to convey hotness, humor but more importantly convey the entire story in conversation. Happy that you think I succeeded.

george

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lara_pinta February 25 2008, 10:00:39 UTC
The way you used dialog in this was really clever.

What can I say except the sex was as good as you always write it and I always like it when Ennis has a monster... which thankfully you managed to mention quite a few times.

A very enjoyable read - thanks George.
Lorna

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sienata February 25 2008, 19:24:04 UTC
He did work that monster part in, subtly of course, rather often, didn't he??? Glad you are reading and enjoying. Did you read some of the other Fest Entries? We had lots of good ones. There is a master links page in my journal, in case you missed it. The betababe did... duh!

Hugs. S!

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george66 March 3 2008, 19:46:49 UTC
Well Ennis Del Mar has a strong lean, lanky physique and its been my expericence that men with that type of built often possess huge monster cocks!! (laughing out loud)

Thanks as always love.

george

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hola carmenmariabs February 25 2008, 14:53:39 UTC
Spain, 16h

wowowowowowow
I do not know if I can survive "lovefest"

Very good, very strong, exciting.

It seems that Mr. Ennis del Mar is very good "seller" knows convince defeat, reasoning and sell everything as overly credible and normal in their work.
Jack do you have any questions about the work of the Sea? Or gives you the same?

Incredible special ....

Carmen

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Re: hola george66 February 27 2008, 16:42:12 UTC
Hey Carmen,

Darling I always forget just how internatural the love for Ennis and Jack is. My God someone is reading a story that I written here in the States from Spain!!!!!! The Internet is a beautiful thing.

Yes Ennis is a fantastic seller isn't he and Jack is sooooo eager to learn!! (laughing out loud)

Thank you for reading!

george

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anonymous February 25 2008, 15:35:32 UTC
Let’s spread your buns a little, for a deeper massage.”

“Hey! That’s my hole!”

“Relax! It’s part of the massage. There’s a muscle there, too! It’s the sphincter. It needs to be relaxed, too.

Best. Ever.

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george66 February 27 2008, 16:38:57 UTC
Thanks I loved that exchange myself!

george

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