THE LAST TEMPTATION OF FATHER DEL MAR

[george66]

Title: The Last Temptation of Father Ennis Del Mar
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Genre: A two-parter LoveFest AU/AU
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: We know the drill.
A/N: This is a story that I've written this story months ago but wasn't quite sure how it would be accepted here. But thanks to the idea started by sienata and lolitaray this story fits perfectly within the frame of

Comments

[lara_pinta]

"The Last Temptation" just cracked me up it is so wicked, sexy and so damn funny I either was laughing out loud or cackling quietly the whole way through.

I think you have really excelled yourself this time, your best yet?

So many highlights but some of my favourites were using the holy oil to remove the evilness from Jack; The Father saying "“My determination to save you is absolute. The devil shall not win tonight!” as he attempts to enter Jack; and of course the last line which is absolutely perfect with the Father having the gall to say "I am after all a devout soldier of God."

Thank you
Lorna

[george66]

Lorna,

Bless your heart!! You have no idea how much I enjoyed writing this story and I'm so glad that many has accept it. Darling you mention three things I loved the most writing this story. The Holy Oil, Father Del Mar's determintion at saving the boy no matter what the method - you got to love Father he is determined to save as many souls as possible (laughing) - and of the last line which I struggled with. Thanks as always for reading darling.

george

[whrson_btch]

Oh Father, forgive me for I have sinned...I enjoyed that WAY too much!!!

WOW George that just blew me away!!!I'm not surprised at your hidden talent though, your comments are always so insightful. Is this really your first attempt at slash?

I'm so looking forward to the sequel "...you are going to need many,many sessions of me ramming the goodness of the Lord deep inside you over and over again." Holy Fuck!!!(literally) hehehe!!!

Great work George, hope we see more of it after the lovefest!!

Thanks!!

w-b

[george66]

w-b

No darling this isn't for first BBslash story. I have a livejournal with several stories. But I must say that many of my earlier stories leaves much to be desired. I guess its true: practice makes perfect. Thanks for reading.

george

[lolitaray]

Dear LORD!!! Anointing the sacred oil!? *faints*

Damn George...this was incredible...really and truly.

You are the King of Smut for sure. I loved the devil play!

[george66]

Hey Lola!

Yes the Holy Oil certain does wonders doesn't it? (laughing) Thanks for reading.

george

[victopet]

The Holy Oil is my absolute favorite, as you already know!!!

Re: Wooo-hoooo!!!!

[george66]

Hey Amber.

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment. It was fun to write and yes I totally agree I definitely saw Heath from The Order when writing this story.

george

!Hola!

[carmenmariabs]

Spain, 15h.

Cheers, cheers, cheers, cheers, cheers....!!!!!

Incredible, exciting, fun.
No surprise stop and smile for the entire reading.
I believe that the Father is far too naive, except at the end, when they draw the conclusion that we have to give more lessons.
The poor Jack ... virgin and child, if clear ....
Great, perfect.
I will not fail to repeat.
More, please.
Carmen

Thank you so much, I have spent a while fabulous. Genial.
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Re: !Hola!

[george66]

Hello Carmen!

My God I still can't believe someone from SPAIN is reading my story!! Awesome!! Thanks darling for reading and leaving a comment. It means a lot!!

george