Amy

Jul 22, 2005 05:42

That girl. That beautiful girl. The one who looks at me with hope and sadness. Your painful eyes your voice that trembles. Your bleeding heart on scarlet sleeve. A pool of blood mixed in with tears. Your knees soaked as you beg. Is their any resurection of my heart, so vile. A heart black with filth that does this to you. Your love so deep ( Read more... )

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justfinethanku July 25 2005, 03:35:47 UTC
we may have our differences but man... you shure can write!

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georgeme89 August 20 2005, 20:06:55 UTC
I dont need the charity of your compliments. DOnt think complimenting me will make me aspire to be anything more than what I know I am. I appreciate you burying the hatchet but this poetry is not that good, its very sappy and hackneyed. Thanks anyways.

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Wow anonymous July 26 2005, 18:04:12 UTC
Hiya. This is Sean's girlfriend Steph. You have a lot of talent as a writer and poet. Maybe it is something that you should seriously pursue.

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Re: Wow georgeme89 August 20 2005, 20:02:21 UTC
Good thing theirs no real poet critques here. Im working on it but this is far from good.

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George amyedwards15 July 26 2005, 21:32:19 UTC
I love you so much. your post makes me cry. i wish you were here. i miss you more than you can imagine. and everone is right. you are a wonderful writer. you have always written me the sweetest things. i want to be with you again and fall into your arms. i want you holding me and kissing me. i miss the feeling of laying in your arms and feeling so protected and safe. i miss being a family with you. please come home soon. i dont even know how to respond to your post. there are so many questions left unanswered and so much i want to say and ask you. i miss you desperately. i love you

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Re: George georgeme89 August 20 2005, 20:03:55 UTC
The unbias opinion of Amy. I love you too!! Im back now.

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Every Day Counts Devotionals jaycubsfan August 3 2005, 19:16:42 UTC
Jay is doing some cleaning up on his LJ site and he was wondering if you wanted to keep recieving the devotionals in your live journal. He is gearing up for the upcoming school year and is looking forward to seeing where God takes us all this year. He is busy planning the fall youth program at the church he works at so I have taken it upon myself to help him out in this matter. I hope you all are having a great summer and look forward to a productive new school year.

all for HIM,
Every Day Counts Devotionals.

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Re: Every Day Counts Devotionals georgeme89 September 21 2005, 18:38:38 UTC
sure that would be fine. I was wondering if Jay and anything to say about philosophy like existentialism and things like that.

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