... And You Are All I Hear.

[geotaxis]

Another experimental writing. Only this time, it is the first piece I have written in a LONG time that pretty much has nothing to do with anybody. In other words, there are no hidden messages in this piece. It is just simply (an idea that I came up with as a result of my deafness) about how I will be able to "hear" the one I love, and it will make

Comments

[gvthesuave]

i liked this, b/c of the repitions you used, and i read it aloud it sounded flowy

"Love dared me to close my eyes,
And let my mind loose"

my favorite line
not too shabby for a piece written after a long time of not writing

[hushstorm]

excellent. very excellent. mwah!

[histrionicmess]

"And find the hand that will make the hair stand on my legs when I touch it."

so, so true. i liked the whole thing.