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rince1wind September 6 2011, 01:18:41 UTC
Looking good and can't wait to read the rest!

(You might want to fix the last sentence in the first paragraph - "The priest drowned" was probably meant to be "The priest droned on" - even if that's what people were kind of wishing!)

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gerolyn7 September 6 2011, 01:21:02 UTC
Those things happen when you keep adding things even after the final edit. LOL

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rince1wind September 6 2011, 01:26:15 UTC
I know what you mean! :)

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