Do You Wanna Know a Secret pt5

[gerolyn7]

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Jensen stopped calling. Jared’s phone sat silently mocking him over and over for weeks. Parties with Misha and Vicky didn’t excite him anymore. Katie and Chad forced him out then cowered at his scowl. The erotic art show made him feel much more lonely

Comments

[blackrabbit42]

So much achiness and longing in here, and so lovely.

And this: Jared ya know? Not like, a boy or a girl, just someone who I really need in my life. I don’t know what I mean. I just, thought, since you liked guys that I could, make you happy for a little bit.” No matter how many times I read it, it still breaks my heart.

:)

[locknkey]

Oh, so much heart ache hear and Jensen sen was so broken, they couldn't stop hurting each other. I really loved this and enjoyed it a lot. :)

[catnthecradle]

Wonderful story, I really enjoyed it. Very heartbreaking but with a LOT of hope.

I'm so glad they worked out their problems in the end, and I'm glad that you had Jensen still going to therapy 6 years later, cos problems like that don't just disappear.

Thank you for sharing.

[proserpine_1982]

Oh this was so very good! Loved it all the way.

Jensen's story really broke my heart, as did Jared's longing. Very exciting, sweet and wonderful fic!

I just wish I could know more of their lives. How things will go with being parents and everything. *hoping for timestamps*

<3 <3 <3

Special wife

[ext_3452461]

You're an incredible writer Gerolyn . Even after they ended up together it's still sad to think of all the time they lost not being true to their feelings. Fabric softener and tacos smell was such a unique way of d vividly describing a smell and furthering a characters personality subtely at the same time

[9tiptoes]

Great Job, Ger! I really really enjoyed this. I love the back and forth in the timeline; watching the boys grow and mature. And the art really did fit perfectly with your story. Perfect pairing.

[9tiptoes]

oh, and I love that you included an original music piece in this. Such a great idea!!