I absolutely love this story and cannot wait for the next chapter. One thing, did you mean for Logan to call Wanda Varner "Wanda Sykes" after the comedian, or was that just a slip? Anyway, great job!
It was a joke since Logan couldn't be bothered to remember her name. But I added an extra line to make that clear since you are not the only one to wonder.
I do love it when Lilly wants Veronica to be happy and she actually appreciates the fact that Logan is a great guy and should be with someone as great as her best friend. To me, Lilly loved Veronica most and she loved Logan as much as she could love a guy, but she wasn't in love with him...and she wants him to be happy! I'm glad Troy's out of the picture and Duncan's decided he's crushing on Meg now, but I don't know if he'd like Logan dating Veronica since I don't think Duncan wants anyone to date Veronica when he can't! It does sound like Veronica is still friends with Casey although she's not dating him anymore, which I like but Logan probably doesn't...I'm sure Logan, Duncan and Keith don't want Veronica dating anyone and just wrapped in cotton fluff..LOL
I"m late again...I need to slap my RL for keeping me from fic, I swear.
Always nicely done. The UST is really starting to kill me, but I love that LV are going to work together on something all the while they have some tension to work through.
Quickly: you have a typo of Hearst when Keith and Veronica are talking before she goes to see Logan, and Wanda's last name was Varner not Sykes (thought I did laugh at the image of Wanda Sykes running for president of their class.
Thanks for catching the Hearst typo. The Wanda Sykes bit was meant to be Logan being an ass, but I clearly did not set up my snark enough so I added another line :)
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And really, commenting within the first 12 hours can't be considered late. You are just used to being the early bird. *grins*
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Always nicely done. The UST is really starting to kill me, but I love that LV are going to work together on something all the while they have some tension to work through.
Quickly: you have a typo of Hearst when Keith and Veronica are talking before she goes to see Logan, and Wanda's last name was Varner not Sykes (thought I did laugh at the image of Wanda Sykes running for president of their class.
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*pets*
And really, commenting within the first 12 hours can't be considered late. You are just used to being the early bird. *grins*
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