Fic: The Sweet Life, L/V, WIP, 4/?

Oct 28, 2006 18:51

Title: The Sweet Life, WIP 4/?
Author:gertinatorPairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, ensemble ( Read more... )

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swaywithme17 October 29 2006, 18:20:38 UTC
Yay! I seriously love this story. When I first saw that it had Lily in it I wasn't sure if I actually would want to read it because she just annoys me so much. Then I saw you were the writer and I was like "OH,Yay! Now I have to read it." And now I am so glad that I did. This story is so cute and adorable! Heh! I love it!

And for once I am not hating Lily! Yay! Her pushing the two of them together. Good Girl! Heh! I can't wait for more! Need Soon to Live! HA!

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hiddeneloise October 30 2006, 00:16:06 UTC
Oy! UST is killing me, too! And the lines!

"Remember you look best from your left side, honey. And I hear you get extra points for the bounce."

OK, having Keith say that is so wrong, and oh, so funny!!! :)

"And I'd love to see you try to stuff Back-up in a picnic basket, Dorothy."

OMG, and now I have that image in my head! Seriously, Backup crammed into a small basket being dragged after Veronica in ruby slippers and a gingham apron. Gah! What are you doing to me?! :)

"If I was going to go that far, I wouldn't invest in a skinny rich boy. Your new best friend would weigh 300 lbs and answer to the name of Bubba."

ROTFL! So Keith! :)

"Have fun. I'd tell you not to do anything I wouldn't do... but there are a whole lot of things I'd do, that you shouldn't be doing."Heee, and this is SO Logan ( ... )

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gertinator October 30 2006, 06:26:23 UTC
Next part is up in my journal and standing patiently in the mod line elsewhere. Course, it's still unrelieved UST. *grins* Next chapter brings relief, I promise. And may come as soon as... tomorrow?

Glad you are enjoying. I had a lot of fun with the snark. It's good to know that it rings true for the characters.

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la623 October 30 2006, 02:10:59 UTC
LOL...I LOVED THIS! It's on now! LOL....this was so cute..the last part especially! Can't wait to read more!

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holly96 October 30 2006, 08:18:42 UTC
"You didn't turn to salt back there, did you? The car's this way."
Ha! A Lot's wife reference? You win at life!

In other news, I am loving the slow build up here, and they are both completely freaked out by the idea of them together. I can't wait to see how they finally figure it out.

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gertinator October 30 2006, 08:20:48 UTC
Did you see chapter 5 is up? Only in my journal, it's stalled in the mods right now at veronicamarsfic, but hopefully they will post it soon.

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miss_v_mars April 26 2008, 09:10:15 UTC
Had his voice cracked? Dear God, he hoped his voice hadn't cracked.

LOL LoVed that line.

Awesome :)

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