So I'm pretty tired, but this was a depressing, if well-written, thing to read at the end of the day.
The POV being so detached worked really well for the story you were telling, and I loved the flashbacks as Logan and Veronica looked at their respective vices.
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The POV being so detached worked really well for the story you were telling, and I loved the flashbacks as Logan and Veronica looked at their respective vices.
Nicely done, Gert!
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I loved it, in all its depressing glory. Now get back to Triangulations ;)
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