Fic: Triangulations, L/V, NC-17 WIP 8/?

[gertinator]

Title: Triangulations, WIP 8/?
Author:gertinator
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, ensemble and OCs
Word Count: 6812
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The epic continues. Sequel to Full Circle which can be found at my indexSpoilers/Warnings: I went AU from 2.22, and now it is about 9 years in the future. Graphic smut, and possible violence once the mystery gets

Comments

[afrocurl]

SQUEE! Ignore this and I'll be back with thoughts later.

[gertinator]

Just had to be the first comment, eh? I knew you couldn't have read it already, I just posted it minutes ago! *grins*

[afrocurl]

Hee--I had to do my squee.

But I really did love this chapter. The way you had Roberts and Mac sort of flirting was really well done, and well, I didn't hate the Donut's intrusions at all.

The beach scene between Logan and Ducnan were perfect too. The awkward tension that lead away to a sort of friendship.

Now I can't tell where this programming storyline is going, but you know I'm along for the ride.

Also--you write really great angry!sex, so I say that needs to be happen a bit more often. The possessive Logan was great.

[rowanceleste]

I loved it and I wouldn't worry about any glaring computer programming errors. This was a fantastic chapter. I loved that they aired a lot of dirty laundry and Logan and Duncan are working on their friendship. I'm also glad that Logan also realizes that Veronica did and does choose him each and every time and always will, so any insecurity he has about Duncan being alone with Veronica is not due to any worry about her feelings. Hee. Felicia also apparently made her feelings known by barfing when Duncan was there. Logan will probably try to train her to attack Duncan if he ever tries to show up at their house again when Logan's not there.

[synful_trixxie]

*sighs happily* Maybe I should stop asking to be spoiled? Cause this? was so fucking perfect and beautiful in a way that just makes me hurt in places I didn't know I had anymore.

I adore you.

*pauses*

but I still wants spoilers *G*

[gertinator]

Aw, you know I'll always spoil you. :)

Maybe not everything, but a lot. :P

I so needed my fix

[tigereyes320]

I love this chapter. I love how Duncan got thrown out. I love the reference to the Net and Veronica trying to do her matchmaking thing.

I also love that Veronica GETS it. About Logan and Duncan and everything. and that she has told him without reservation that if there are sides in this war she's on Logan's side.

Duncan if he isn't being an ass needs to get off of his and get his GED, talk about living off of Daddy's money

Re: I so needed my fix

[gertinator]

It's my own cathartic thing to make Veroncia get it this time around. How could she possibly choose Duncan the rolled-his-eyes-at-her-thinking-she-was-raped guy, over Logan, Mr. "I just want to be here for you, what ever you need"???? Besides, it's Logan's world that I am writing in, ain't it? 'Cause he's really the only one I care about. *winks*

Duncan does seriously need to get a life, doesn't he? Ah, I only keep him a round as a plot device.

[__barelyalive]

you must have done really good because i probably only got... oh, a fourth of it. just enough to know what was going on, sort of, but you know, i kinda like that i didnt get all of it. it's more... real that way. hahaha.

seriously, this is its own canon. kudos as always to you miss gert.

and i dont know how i fell about DK and logan... rebuilding their friendship. it makes sense but it's just not... ok. it's just me and my dislike of the Donut. however, logan needs friends. but i would really like it if Dick came back. :D

[gertinator]

Don't worry, DK isn't quite back in anyone's good graces, and Veroncia is going to rip on him a lot in the future. *grins* 'Cause it's my story and I like it that way.

Oh, and Dick will be back soon. Maybe even the next chapter. I've written the scene already, just have to make some timeline decisions. (ooooh. A spoiler!)