Fic: The Sweet Life, L/V, WIP, 2/?

Oct 19, 2006 00:53

Title: The Sweet Life, WIP 2/?
Author:gertinatorPairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, ensemble ( Read more... )

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__barelyalive October 19 2006, 08:15:39 UTC
so knew there was a reason to check the friends page before bed even if it 3 AM. bwahahahahaha.

so. love the slow development. love the tension. love the 'must not got there or else castration (male and female) awaits' thoughts. absolutely brilliant.

so. good night. glad this was posted for my nghtly contemplation of all things great. :D

and NAKED LOGAN. oh man, to be there. siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh.

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gertinator October 19 2006, 14:56:44 UTC
You can count on me for the late night postings. *wink*

Hope you had lovely Nekkid!Logan dreams.

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afrocurl October 19 2006, 08:40:18 UTC
Gert--any chapter that starts off with Naked!Logan is ok.

I like that each of them is interested, but trying not to show it.

Lilly isn't even bothering me here either...nicely done!

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gertinator October 19 2006, 14:58:34 UTC
Yeah, originally I was sticking to canon things and just shifting them around. But then I decided some gratuitous Nekkid!Logan was necessary. *winks* After all, this story is so fluffy I'm not gonna be able to put in my usual dose of smut.

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afrocurl October 19 2006, 17:13:48 UTC
Gratutious naked!Logan is never a bad thing...especially if it happens before he realizes that he wants to be with Veronica. That way it won't be awkward later..

See..you're making the end result so much easier...

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motylik October 19 2006, 09:34:20 UTC
awesome! their feeling the attrection. Now if they would only stop fighting it *sigh* Great chapter.

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jen_knee_suu October 19 2006, 11:23:14 UTC
Gert..you are awesome! Thanks you soooooo much for Nekkid!Logan! I loved it! I can just pictured drunk Logan on the diving board...swinging his pants! Hehe! And then picture Veronica trying to get him down.
I'm loving this fic! Both are thinking about the other..and they both know they pretty much shouldn't. And you threw in an AU version Hot Dogs scene! That is like my all time favorites scene from s1! Followed by that extrememly hot kiss of course!
Anywyas..I'm loving the buildup you have going. I wonder if you're going to have Logan possibly jealous over a possible Veronica/Casey hookup.. :)
His flavor of the month needs to start sliding towards blondes...short, petite ones..that smell of marshmellows and promises! Hehe!
Awesome job! Thanks again!! *hugs and gives you cookies* And I'm going to friend you..cause you're just awesome :)

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gertinator October 19 2006, 15:01:31 UTC
Didja notice the "flavors of the month" were named Jenny and Sue? *giggles* Thought I'd add a little birthday bonus.

*munches cookies before breakfast*

Thanks for always reading and commenting! It makes it so much more fun to write.

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jen_knee_suu October 19 2006, 19:05:09 UTC
Hehehe! I didn't notice the names! That is hilarious! I'll be his flavor of the month! Thanks again!

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lapdogdesign October 19 2006, 11:40:31 UTC
Oh Gert. *sigh* Naked!Logan...*imagines*

I'm loving the slow build up between these two. Seriously I'm so looking forward to reading how Duncan and Lilly get to where they're cool with L/V together like they were in V's dream. Because Logan and V are right - at this point Lilly and Duncan would be furious. Should be a fun ride!

And Logan saying/thinking this -- Totally going in the rotation. -- should be in EVERY fic. Ah, the imagery it brings. Yummy.

More please!

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gertinator October 19 2006, 15:04:14 UTC
The rotation comment was one of my all time favorites on VM. *grins* Logan is so unrepentant about his pervy nature, makes me love him even more.

I'm taking a long weekend and going camping, but I'll be back next week with more. I've gotta finish it up so I can get to teh full circle sequel.

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