[Sakura] Inside And Out

[petronia]

Ban said he didn't believe he and Ginji could've run up a 3,000,000-yen tab at the Honky Tonk, but the fact of it was he had no idea. Paul kept the books and could have been screwing with them for all he knew, but Paul also fed them on credit. It was better not to inquire too closely. During long dark nights of the soul he could admit that when

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[anonymous]

I liked this very much. Please to be writing more?

[anonymous]

Very good! I really like the tone and the sense of time and the way you went back and forth between broad statements and details.

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