RayK/Turnbull fic

[llassah]

Author: llassah
Title: Daisies on the Battlefield
Pairing: RayK/Turnbull
Rating: Nc-17
Prompt: 12. Turnbull/Kowalski - undercover at the 'Blue Oyster' in full gear - drag, leather, bike...; "Look, Fraser, if I'm gonna be wearing heels I'm gonna need an escort about a foot taller than you." from

Comments

[sansets]

And I know I said it earlier tonight, but I kind of love this story! :-D I really like the bit that you added with “So you’re my…boyfriend, then?"“Should I get you flowers?”

Seriously, well done! (And the fact that you also wanted to write Ray/Donne makes me feel a little bit better about myself. Not much better, but some! *g*)

Um, your 2nd LJ cut leads to the end of the story. You might want to fix that! :-)

[llassah]

Hehe- rayK Donne- a subgenre just waiting to happen. And I'm glad you liked the Turnbull flowers bit- he went so brilliantly overboard in the frannie date scene, I think he'd do the same here

And I've fixed the lj formatting stuff- remind me trying to make things pritty on lj at 3 am is a stupid idea next time I get tempted to *g*

A huge thank you for all your help!
llassah
xxx

[lipstickcat]

You are a wonderful, wonderful person, who aparently crawled into my brain at some point and found my favourite darkest kink combo of Turnbull and erotic asphixiation...

I love your Ray voice, and you get Turnbull so perfectly.

Should I get you flowers?”

“Turnbull.”

“ Or chocolate?”

“Turnbull.”

“ Or a corsage? “

Had me grinnng wildly and hugging my cup of tea to me ^_^ *pets puppy!Turnbull*

Also loved God, what must go on in his head. I’m hardly the poster boy for rational thinking, but it must be like a fucking fairground in there. because that's it! That's it exactly, Ray has the nail on the head ^_^

You realise that you're my Turnbull/Ray dealer now don't you? *slave to you*

[llassah]

Yup- I'm crawling around in your head as I write. Kinda dusty in there- why do you need so many whips?

And Turnbull's a goofball, bless him. Glad you liked- such a puppy. And in his head is a three ring circus with many many clowns. Now I want one of those brainmaps for Turnbull with 'cheese' written in one section, and 'laa laa laaaa' written all over the rest. Hee hee, I'm gonna have to dust off my icon hat I think

Your dealer? But that makes writing kinky smut seem...seedy, somehow ^_~

hehe, thank you kindly!

(this is a positive review. no, really. honest. don't you trust me even a little bit?)

[debris_k]

Yeay, you posted the fic! And it's absolutely marvelous! :-D

and try to resist the urge to say ‘to the gaybar!’

ROTFLOL
*gasps* I think you broke my funny-bone. *giggles some more*

I really enjoyed this story, all the bits between the above quote and the one below were wonderfully hot enjoyable. And then:

I don’t want that. I’m not - not whole enough for that.

*sound of glass shattering*
That? That was my heart, you... you... sneaky mean writer you! All my lovely visions of Ray/Ren happily ever after, washed down the drain... *sniff* I ask you, who wants realism, very plausible realism at that, in their fics? Huh? Now I'll have to get a paper crown with Queen of Denial written on it with a magic marker... And you're all to blame! Darn you for writing so convincingly, darn you all to heck!

Re: (this is a positive review. no, really. honest. don't you trust me even a little bit?)

[llassah]

Glad you liked it- I hope you realise you made me do a computer chair dance when I saw the prompt. There was sqeeage, lots of squeeage!

And the ending? Nah, I was just messin' with ya.

Here's how it really goes
“Yeah, that’s the one. I don’t want that. I’m not - not whole enough for that.”"I can remake you, Ray. A few planks of wood, some plasterboard and you'll be good as new

[debris_k]

I should be rude and bitchy in my comments more often if this is the reward I get. Plus, I'm v. pleased you were please by the "Blue Oyster" prompt; aah, the happy memories of my mis-spent youth watching "Police Academy" movies on the VCR again and again... *whistful sigh*

"I can remake you, Ray. A few planks of wood, some plasterboard and you'll be good as new."

Plasterboard?! Ouch, I laughed so hard I pulled something. *gasps amid laughter*

And this:

Standard issue RCMP 'riding into the sunset' horse.

That. *point* I want one of those. As a hardcore lover of "Blazing Saddles", this was the one thing that made it all up to me. You can now wrap me up in a cornfield and stick a daisy in my mouth, and I'll be content for the rest of my days in happy denial land.

Now I have to save the fic again, so I don't forget The One True Ending(TM) written just for little ol' me... You make a convicing case for fangirling, you know.

[llassah]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTJMerul33E -this scene? This scene is to blame for one hell of a lot, hehe.

And plasterboard is how you mend a broken heart- that's the bit all the songrwiters miss out on. I guess they think it's a bit prosaic.

Glad you liked the One True Ending (TM)*summons RCMP 'riding into sunset' horse in order to escape essay writing*
xxx

[debris_k]

LMAO at the scene! I can't believe it's up there *holds a grouch against non save-allowing YouTube* these days you can find just about everything on it.

It's a good thing to know about plasterboard. We just had a whole bathroom built out of it, so it's good the know the leftover will be of some use. ^.^

*helps you cover your tracks while escaping from Evil Essay Writing on horseback*

[slidellra]

What a cool start to the challenge! I'm kind of in love with this paragraph:

I twitch and do a little headshake, because I need to be alert for this. I look across to where Frase is looking at Turnbull, his focus on, fuck, I dunno, the type of cow the leather came from or something. See, Frase can do that; he can look at leather and admire the craftsmanship without any thought of sex entering his head. Benton Fraser, RCMP, is not susceptible to spontaneous thoughts of sex. He has them when he wants to, not when the world does. Me? Susceptible. Turnbull … I don’t know, but I’m gonna spend tonight finding out, and the signs are good.

[llassah]

Hehe, glad you liked! Turnbull in leather is a good way to start annnything *g*. And yeah, that paragraph was fun to write- Fraser probably does have spontaneous thoughts of sex, but he also has the neck crack and the eyebrow rub to get rid of it.