01. chaos theory (sungyeol/woohyun)

Nov 26, 2011 15:48

they say hurricanes begin in Africa.

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r: g, p: sungyeol/woohyun, f: infinite

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yuutong November 26 2011, 12:59:15 UTC
hi so umm i kind of love this. just. how you mix in current knowledge and future knowledge, and sungyeol being slightly contrary to get his way, and woohyun being his normal lovable greasy self and fffff.

i wish i had the words to properly express myself, but it's like 5am right now and i've been awake 23 hours OTL so i apologize, because this deserves so much more love than i can currently articulate ;~; <3

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geuraee November 27 2011, 04:31:02 UTC
don't worry, this is a perfectly articulate comment - thank you!

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sven2ity November 26 2011, 17:05:37 UTC
ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL LET ME LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW.

yeah I don't even like this pairing, but, this. this. the win is so much TTwTT

gosh woohyun, so much grease LOL

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geuraee November 27 2011, 04:31:41 UTC
woohyun and sungyeol have such an interesting relationship, haha. i'm glad you gave this a chance; thanks for reading!

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innocently_hot November 26 2011, 18:23:35 UTC
Are the facts true? It's interesting and if it's true, wow, I just add another knowledge through an infinite's fanfic.

Back to the fic, I must say that it is adorable how they met, and how woohyun opening the chances for them by giving his number but it was sungyeol who call. I really enjoy this and there's nothing more better than having Woohyun's greasiness rubbed against sungyeol! I hope this happen in real life too hehe

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geuraee November 27 2011, 04:33:45 UTC
i was actually inspired to write this through a poem, but if you google 'hurricanes begin in africa', there are tons of articles that talk about it, so there's truth in that. as for chaos theory and the butterfly effect, it's 'a branch of mathematics that deals with complex systems whose behavior is highly sensitive to slight changes in conditions, so that small alterations can give rise to strikingly great consequences' (thanks, dictionary!)

thanks for reading!

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yeomin November 26 2011, 20:46:27 UTC
woohyun/sungyeol is a pairing I hardly read, but I think I might have fallen in love with them now ♥
the little facts you put into the story really fit, you worked them out perfectly. the story just flows and I can't help but wanting to read more. their little bickering like they're 8 years old is extremely sweet and I can imagine them doing it in real life too. just ugh, woohyun being his greasy self and sungyeol being all adorable makes the whole story even more perfect.

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geuraee November 27 2011, 04:34:58 UTC
i'm glad you gave this pairing a try! they have such an interesting relationship and i just wanted to try and capture that in words. thank you for reading!

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countrymir November 26 2011, 20:57:43 UTC
this was really good.

it seemed ot flow exceptionally well and i love how you were able to make a totally new universe but still kept things simple and in character. no one seemed forced to fit into the roles of the fics and they seemed very realistic and human at all times.

and the repetition of the first lines of a few sentences was a really clever trick. you used it in your favor and it worked exceptionally well in this fic. it brought back things and kept everything very cohesive, both the lines about who woohyun is and the butterflies and hurricanes.

really the fact that you opened it and closed it on the same note just made my day, have to mem this because its simplicity is really doing me in

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geuraee November 27 2011, 04:35:57 UTC
i'm a fan of circular endings, so it makes me glad to hear people enjoy it as well. thank you!

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