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gfaynefan

The Return Part 3

Oct 11, 2009 20:15

This is the third and concluding part of "The Return."

( The Return Part 3 ( Conclusion) )

Comments 17

The Return anonymous October 12 2009, 01:23:43 UTC

Wow, just wow! Excellant story, hope to see more.

sojourn_storm October 12 2009, 05:09:08 UTC

I truly enjoy your FoL fics and your writing. I liked this very much. I liked that they'd grown up apart but that Blair realized what she had wasn't what she needed and took action. Natalie's life sounded like a hoot and I just really liked this AU. Thanks for writing this.

anonymous October 12 2009, 08:16:09 UTC

This was fun to read, thanks for sharing.

pens_co927 October 12 2009, 15:23:34 UTC

good job! I loved it! There hasn't been much FoL fic lately. I was so glad to see this.

carinjo October 12 2009, 18:42:21 UTC

this was just so many kinds of wonderful!
LMFAO “Even I can admit that she improves the scenery. And you know my administration has always encouraged the beautification of Peekskill.”
“Beautification of Peekskill, huh?” Snake queried, as the three of us watched Blair step out of the pool and slowly dry herself off. “A lot better than the geranium pots on Main Street.”

and since i'm on holiday, i can spend some time re-reading some of your other stories. good times indeed.