present for Scorpioyue

[ghaidin]

Dear scorpioyue, here is the "drabble" I promised. Please forgive me if the point of view is not Camus' but some imaginary character. It's still about how he came to be the stuck up, hardass cool and detached man he is, so that makes it a fic about Camus and sets my debt straight...right? *pleading watery eyes

Comments

[scorpioyue]

I'm already so glad I asked Camus. Your original character is easy to like, and the story promises to be quite interesting. Definitely looking forward for more. *bounces happily and glomps*

A tiny little thing: Most of them will dye (...) <- In that case it would be 'die'. ^^/

[scorpioyue]

I also liked that Aquarius Saints' personality is different from Camus' personality. :D

If one day I build a gift!fics section in my site, may I upload this fic? ^^;/

[ghaidin]

The ficcie is yours, dear :)

About the aquarius saint...well, I figured I might as well have a character I liked

It´s so fun to be in the Camus-hating business...I might like the guy if I put my heart to it, but really... what for?

[ghaidin]

I´m glad you´re liking it so far :)

I´ll change it right away...it´s one of those mistakes that´s got stuck in my brain and it´s likely to stay there forever

[undertheice]

I second scorpioyue's comments. An interesting original character, that I already like, and a story that already caught my attention. This story wins!

What I'm wondering right now though. If us Aquarius are so charming, why is Camus such an Ice Queen?! I can't wait to read the rest and find out. I'm so glad it grew like a monster. ;)

By the way, I caught one or two small typos. I could point them out if you want?

[ghaidin]

Thank you so very much! I was a bit worried that the story would be just boring.

About the typos, please do point them out. My English is very shaky at times, and since I don't have a kind beta-reader to filter things through they just jump around my stuff like happy bugs. Thanks a ton in advance *glomps*

[undertheice]

Boring? Not one bit! So there's no need to worry about that. :)

“Don’t give up on that child too son, Aquarius.(...)"
son=soon?
I think it was this one and the "dye", that scorpioyue already pointed out, the ones that called my attention. I don't remember anything else. I'll keep in mind for the next episodes to take notes if I see any spelling mistake ^^

[ghaidin]

thanks! *goes change*

Dye vs die is a lost battle for me :(