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Jan 06, 2006 05:42

And the last chapter of the Camus' nameless fic. Millions of thanks to scorpioyue, undertheice, poppithefenling and sagakure for their comments and suggestions. I think it's the longest thing I've ever written and shared, and it was very helpful (plus just plain great) to have your input. You rock, gals!
As I advanced, this is the part I like least... but I couldn't drag it any longer so I ( Read more... )

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cygny January 6 2006, 11:33:57 UTC
Oh, I have never been very fond of Camus, but this last installment (sorry for not commenting before), just brought me to tears. Poor Camus, poor Master of his. I love the fact that he seals Camus' heart, or the last bit of emotions in there, with love. *sniffle*

It was wonderfully written, Ghai, so well done!

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ghaidin January 6 2006, 11:43:44 UTC
Mr Icecube, you mean? Nei, me neither :P

Thanks a lot *goes tomato red yet again*

Sorry? Don't be silly! If you had to read and comment in every single entry you'd spend your day in front of the computer and wouldn't even have enough time to finish! *smooches*

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cygny January 6 2006, 12:02:27 UTC
It's not that I dislike him. I dislike very few Saint Seiya characters, I'm mostly ... indifferent about many of them. But this brought out my sympathy for poor Camus though.

And so glad the card arrived, I was suddenly panicking that my waiting would have caused it to arrive after you left again, which of course wasn't the idea it all :P And yay for the awwww :D

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ghaidin January 6 2006, 12:09:54 UTC
For some reason, I though you did like him...pro'ly was just extending your liking of Hyoga. ;)

Dislike is too strong a word. I love making fun of him, though, and he is a bit too scary (so cold and all) for me. And he makes ice, for goodness sake!ICE!

Me too, I was so happy when I saw it yesterday! I walked around with a silly smile for half the day.

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poppithefenling January 6 2006, 11:59:25 UTC
A brilliant ending to this piece and once again extremely well written. More imagery in this section too. Bravo! That was one hell of a project ^_^

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ghaidin January 6 2006, 12:11:32 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it *keeps on going furious red* I meant to ask you in your LJ, but I forgot... that story of yours is part of a bigger original story, right? If not, I'm 100% unfamiliar with the charas :-/

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poppithefenling January 6 2006, 13:22:32 UTC
Lor Randir: Nascent - that's the currently planned title. It's my own original works :)

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scorpioyue January 6 2006, 13:35:43 UTC
*holds the fic tightly and then clings to you* T0T

It was just so beautifully sad and wonderfully written. ♥__________♥ Poor Aquarius Saint, poor Camus... I think this is one of the few fics where Camus' master doesn't have to do anything with the fact that he's so cold. And that detail of him saving his heart so that someone can manage to revive that bit of his old self... And the master seeing his beloved ones in the lights... *cries*

I'm truly honored that this fic is dedicated to me, I really am. I'm so glad I met you too! And thank you so much for this present! *megasquishglomps you*

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ghaidin January 6 2006, 16:43:35 UTC
*glomps back* I'm so happy you liked it! *squeezes*

Hopefully silly sweet myself hopes Youghurt or Milo managed to undo the damage.

Silly question, how do you make those cute hearts in the text? I've been meaning to ask but I always forget *shifty eyes*

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scorpioyue January 6 2006, 19:33:33 UTC
Yay! :D *is squeezed*

I hope so too. Youghurt. XD!

♥ = ♥

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poppithefenling January 7 2006, 22:24:04 UTC
That avatar is just too adorable :p makes me want to hug you! *hug*!

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undertheice January 6 2006, 21:46:49 UTC
I knew the ending wouldn't dissapoint! By far, this is my favorite fic of yours. Camus' changes were almost painful to see because, knowing what an Ice Queen Camus is, I knew the process and the result wasn't going to be good. Since I loved the "master" character, it was all the more painful. And I loved that :B

My favorite scene has to be the fight one. A fight scene well written = so much love.

I applaud you! The monster must have been difficult to control, but you did it well. The result is a wonderful fic that I really enjoyed reading. :)

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undertheice January 6 2006, 21:47:24 UTC
HAH! I forgot to close the small tag well. *crawls into a hole*

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ghaidin January 6 2006, 23:16:54 UTC
*bounces around happily* :D~~~

It's a great compliment coming from you, D ♥ (I just learnt how to make the tiny lil hearts *squee!*)

The monster was hard to control, but I'm glad it's finished! Now I just need to finish "power" and tackle sagakure's twincest request.

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sagakure January 10 2006, 16:04:22 UTC
I forgot to comment on this chapter back when you posted it, but I'm catching up now. ^^;/
I loved the fic, and the ending is also very cool! Sad, but a very interesting take on what might have made Camus what he is. :D
*is also happy that her input was helpful* *^^*
*glomps* :D

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ghaidin January 11 2006, 21:29:29 UTC
*glomps back*

Thankies left and right :)

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