Comments | gheethegoth: Forever You and I

gheethegoth

Forever You and I

Jan 25, 2009 11:03

Disclaimer : Super Junior members are belong to SM entertainment.

Genre : Romance, friendship

Rated : T

Pairing(s) : Kang-In/Eeteuk, Kang-In/Eunhyuk, Donghae/Eunhyuk

A/N : Huwa.. In the end, I did a story in english! This story is about what the Pearl Blue Team felt after the card-kissing game. This is my first english fanfiction, so I’m so grateful if ( Read more... )

pairing : kangteuk, pairing : eunhae

Comments 14

crazylilazngirl January 25 2009, 05:39:56 UTC

PART 2 :D
because... Donghae and Eunhyuk need to have smiles on their faces :D
like Eeteuk and KangIn >__< but not up against a wall?
because fan girls will attack them like me
HaeHyuk??
Part 2 yes? yes?

XD
Thank you for sharing :D

crazylilazngirl January 25 2009, 05:41:45 UTC

“you don’t have to broke my heart further..”
broke should be break :D
because you have the word 'have' in the sentence so it doesn't have to be past tense :D

crazylilazngirl January 25 2009, 05:45:25 UTC

because >__< I have no idea what I just pressed..
I'm commenting again T________________________T

XD
I love your idea :D
it's genius
JAPANESE? yes? no? maybe? a little?? x___________X
sigh XD
but..
if you don't mean... I demand would like it if you wrote a Part 2?
maybe? yes? no? :3

XD
because
even though you say your english isn't good, I think it's amazing :D

Thank you for sharing~!

gheethegoth January 25 2009, 05:50:14 UTC

THANK YOU... huhuhu.. I'm so grateful for receiving your comment....well, this is unbetaed but I was too stubborn and can't wait to share ^^
well, I'm planning to make the sequel, full of Dong/Hyuk
Thanks, once more ^^

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ai_sumairu January 25 2009, 06:10:56 UTC

I love the HaeHyuk in this!!!!!! XD KangTeuk rocks too but HaeHyuk!!!!!!! >-<

HaeHyuk needs a happy ending I tell you!!! :D

gheethegoth January 25 2009, 06:19:53 UTC

okay okay ^^
actually,i haven't created the plot,but I'll try my best to make the sequel. i LOVE LOVE LOVE KangTeuk and DongHyuk ^^
Thanks a lot for your comment!!!

ai_sumairu January 25 2009, 07:30:37 UTC

No prob! Thanks for adding me! I added you right back! :)

hirot0 January 25 2009, 12:27:17 UTC

hey dear <333

aaww such a cute story <3 i loooooooove kangteuk, one of my otp's ^^
haha and i second the request for another chap with eunhae xDD
(and if you need a beta reader for that, i could do it xD kehe)

gheethegoth January 26 2009, 07:41:17 UTC

yay! xD
I feel grateful if you wanna help me with grammar and dictions. I'll contact you asap if i've finished the next chappie! XD
Thanks for the comment, i love to reveive a feedback :)

freedomthisway February 27 2009, 11:20:24 UTC

Love the last part, the EunHae moment. :D

Are you from Bandung?

Lagi cuci mata di Dago? LOL

Ketemu juga SuJu fans yang bareng dari Indo. :D

gheethegoth February 28 2009, 04:14:20 UTC

yes yes I'm from bandung, and now I'm washing my eyes in plaza dago, hahaha... anak bandung juga kah? XD~

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