[fic] The Pins, Chapter 4 Last Chapter!

[ghibli22]

Title: The Pins
Rating PG13
Characters: In this chap: Spain, Romano, Belgium, France
Summery: Sometimes, you dont really how important something is until you loose it. And sometimes, its harder to get it back
Notes/Warning: LONG LONG chapter as the finale. I hope you like it anyway

Comments

[arexftw]

Aha, awww, this pulled at my heart strings a couple times. I've been wanting to say this for a while, so now's as good a time as ever. c: I honestly think you're a very good writer with the way you execute your stories, though I find some of the plot and little bits of(, I don't know how to put this;;) detail(?) very, umm, hard to believe;; Aha, if you care at all to hear me out, I'll list examples of what I mean. I hope I don't sound rude;; I really do love seeing new stories from you. <333

[aseies]

Awww so cute~

I can understand Spain's price, but I think it would have been more... idk dramatic for him to not be able to say 'I love you' at all. I think that, over being mute, would have been a worse punishment. But who knows you might have just wanted to end the story, and I can't blame you for that. xD /multichapter fics are hard!

[pixelmicrocat]

I'm...I'm fucking crying my eyeballs out here~! TAT
BAAAAWwww~~~that was so sweet and happy and sad at the same time, I feel so touched in so many ways~!
Great story, will be looking forward to more of your fics :D

[puddingproducts]

I'm crying so much omg ; A ;
This was so cute and sweet and sad and I loved it so much~

SPAIN'S PRICE. That was so touching, my favourite part of this ;;

This was beautiful, thank you! I'll be looking for new stories from you <333

[xxxelizavetaxxx]

>////< AWWWW SO CUTE IM GUNNA DIE!!!!

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ok i've recovered, and i want u to write like a oneshot about francis, i think u have a good story there...but yeah~ This may be the cutest one yet~