oh the ANGST!! I feel so sorry for Gakuto.. I was hoping for a happy ending, that it was just a misunderstanding, but I thing this ending is great. It made me sad but it feels so real. and I love the 'things are easier in dreams' theme.
It's so happy and it's so sad and it's so good. I really liked the part where they both thought the other was a drinker, but it turns out nobody was. :D
Oh, ouch. I totally thought it was going to have a happy ending and that just made it hurt all the more when it didn't.
That kind of makes it sound like I didn't like it, but I did. This is very well written and I really like your characterization of Gakuto. The last section is my favorite, ouch factor and all.
Your Mukahi characterization is dead on, and I like the post-Hyoutei story you've given him. I've always felt like Oshitari and Mukahi have had a lot of drama in their relationship/friendship, and your fic captures that perfectly. Very nicely done!
The ending hurts me. ;____; But it was very, very beautiful! Your characterization, the emotion from everything made this a very enjoyable read. \:D/ But oh, the angst. ;____; I love this~ ♥
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I was hoping for a happy ending, that it was just a misunderstanding, but I thing this ending is great. It made me sad but it feels so real.
and I love the 'things are easier in dreams' theme.
It's a really good fic ^^
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[kirilenko]
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That kind of makes it sound like I didn't like it, but I did. This is very well written and I really like your characterization of Gakuto. The last section is my favorite, ouch factor and all.
[adamczak]
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[babel]
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